A Profound Journal

A Profound Journal

A Chapter by Pax
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poetry pretending to be a prose in journal style

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Dear reader

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I understand now, how the life of the weeds works, for I am just one of them; just a little different like everybody else is unique. This ostrich is not free to fly but it’s free to run as he pleases. This bee is sorry to all that it stings, it’s because he’s too vulnerable from harsh realities.

 

 

 

To unblock what is locked, to release the unpleasant burden. What creeps out spit it out; never ponder on the things black or just plain blank.

 

 

Do you think this cat is sorry enough from everyone he scratched? Well I think he's really sincere for he didn’t repeat the same mistakes. Regrets are just a pain in the a*s, better not to overdo things.

 

 

Sincerely you friendly neighbor,

w.Pax




© 2013 Pax



Author's Note

Pax
a sorry to everyone i've hurt...updated for some errors.

sorry for giving little info about this, but it speaks for itself...
I'm thankful to all that had read this...

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Pax:
Why on earth would you think you have hurt anyone...because your 'word choice' did not match their reality? Don't sweat it! The objects you have displayed and written about seem to only hurt humans et al when they are in protective mode. When their space is invade, without an invitation, they and even humans get antsy. If they are left alone to roam freely in their own environment, then like-minded can only harm each other. A hurtful action can and will be repeated if the behavior is not corrected. That's what I think you mean by "Regrets." Let it Go!

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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"Regrets are just a pain in the a*s, better not to overdo things."
I like the complete poem. I like honest and direct logic. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

3 Years Ago

Thanks my friend, it's an old piece, I just revisited and reflect on it. it's always good to read yo.. read more
Yeah, it already speaks for itself (:

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Rhianne Ney

4 Years Ago

*grin* HIndi po nakakasawang magbasa ng works ninyo
Pax

4 Years Ago

Salamat little sis...
Rhianne Ney

4 Years Ago

Walang anuman po, Kuya Pax
very deep and meaningful thoughts! I can say the animals are really innocent in their protection style, as it`s given by nature to them, if they are sorry or not...Seems bee is favorite character :) for me too, and it has so many functions, as humans never could have...And I love cats, be sure they are never sorry for the scratches, but we are who really provoke them! (just smile) very nice writing, dear Pax! and the photo...
No♥r~


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

4 Years Ago

I found all the photos in google and put it together... and oh except for the cat... That's my black.. read more
Sugar Plum ♥

4 Years Ago

you cat is sooo lovely! :)
Pax

4 Years Ago

thank you..... he is but doesn't likes to cuddle... he likes to slack off... hehe..
this reminded me of all those wonderful chinese proverbs that always seem so wise. this was thought-provoking and unique, unique to YOU and your own understanding of that wonderful thing that is life. i really enjoyed this. fantastic.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

4 Years Ago

thank you, I'm really glad you liked it...and find it unique...
i appreciate your thoughts my.. read more
What's up Mr Pax? Why so glum?

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

4 Years Ago

this very short review say so much....thank you...
I'm a bit gloomy these days, must be the c.. read more
such a very different apology, but very well written. Excellent my friend, purely excellent.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

4 Years Ago

yes a different kind it is... thank you my friend.
I've been thinking lately about how much power we have to hurt one another without realizing it. This makes me wonder if regrets are really a bad thing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

4 Years Ago

regrets is a bad thing if you ponder on it too much, it creates emotional distress...
and yes .. read more
Your heart shines through your words... both your poetic prose and your author's note as well... Though I've heard people say they have no regrets, I am thankful when people realize that we all cause pain... hurt those we love as well as perfect strangers... Seeking forgiveness is the deepest expression of love that can lead to healing... and yes, pride must be put aside... Your words here express in metaphors and more such wondrous glimpses of the shadows and light that dance around us in the day... May we all at least have enough regret to say I am sorry... Thank you, dear friend.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

4 Years Ago

I'm always thankful to you for you are such an inspiring person....
thanks, I'm glad you unde.. read more
Pax

4 Years Ago

I'm always thankful to you for you are such an inspiring person....
thanks, I'm glad you unde.. read more
Lls. bees are not sorry! but i love it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

4 Years Ago

yes I know, thanks... I'm glad you liked this.
i have read tons of poets about apologies- some cheesy, some good, some bad and some normal. but this.....this had to be the best, had to be the most thoughtful and powerful poem i have ever read. when i saw it first i felt that it might be something about nature but you just amazed me...wow!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

4 Years Ago

I'm really honored...thank you.

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