Duality

Duality

A Poem by Pax
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a poem about Equilibrium and many more... :)

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Has Night deserted Day

Or Day just can’t stand Night

*

Good is staying silent

Though Shines Brightly

Lighting the pathways that have come across its Being

Warm is burning its Pain 

@

Evil is out in the open

Engulfing all corners with Darkness

Blinding all the pathways that have come across it Being

 Cold is shrilling its Numbness

*

A step into Reality is a Journey

towards to the unending challenges

*

A flight into Fantasy is a Dreamland Moments

of life’s relaxation in short time bases

*

Duality has two faces

while Neutrality has none.

*

 Heaven’s tranquility Sparkles

Earth blooms in Balance

Hell cries in Vain

Time,

 Dimension,

Situation& reaction

Partake its Solution

 

Manifestation,

Imagination & Illusion,

Manage its Creation

 

All hangs in a state of Equilibrium

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~w.Pax~

 


© 2013 Pax



Author's Note

Pax
photo's are from google pile up together by me to achieved its purpose for the poems...

thank you for reading!

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This was a treasure trove of wisdom and powerful insights on life and its duality where only in the balance we can seek perfection but not in our neutrality . We have to fight the good fight , suffer the consequences of our actions , live to the fullest even in the face storms and rains , confront the realities of the unjust world for we have to set the path and the mission to achieve the inner peace and joy .
Keep penning my friend and finding that equilibrium ...:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Napaka-colorful naman ng piece na to. LOL.

The duality of nature... day and night, black and white, good and bad... those are the two sides of life.

But I can see here more about balance than duality. Duality is just a part of this...so I think I can make something which focuses on the duality of human nature. LOL.

Anyway, when it comes to balance/ equilibrium...I really like how you crafted this piece. Balance is a great concept, for in life we cannot achieve contentment if we don't have equilibrium in all things around us.

A brilliant piece here, my friend. Keep inspiring uninspired people like __. LOL. Thanks for the link.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The college of poems is a great expression for the poetry. Your use of colour and form is awesome, and you images are lovely.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I`m sorry to say this piece leaves me cold. The sentiments are laudable, but phrased as slogans. They make assumptions that man can control his own destiny. The problem is inherent in the asssumption - he is combative, confrontational and territorial. This fails as a thesis and as a poem. I`m sorry again P.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pete Langley

4 Years Ago

This is a philosophical question that`s been around since Plato and before - and he came to the same.. read more
Pax

4 Years Ago

wow... actually to be honest, i haven't touch or understand plato's work or any other philosopher..... read more
Pete Langley

4 Years Ago

There`s nothing to thank me for, mate! I`m as imperfect as the next man, and more than most.P.
This is such an energetic poem filled with so many contrasting and clever images. I really liked:

Duality has two faces

while Neutrality has none.

This was deep and enjoyable to read.


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was very well put. It makes me think.
Nice job, Pax. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

First off..kudos to a brilliant pic to inspire both the writer and reader. The struggle between all that is good and bad in this world has become an endless battle. Does there need to be a balance...can there be too much light? How would we know...I don't think I've seen it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this poem was awesome! I am favoriting this! The only critique I would have, and I'm not sure if you did this on purpose or not, but in between the stanzas there is always a * and in between one of the stanzas instead of a * there is an @. But seriously great write! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

4 Years Ago

those are symbols to represent my artistic expression: feel * is like stars(my friend said i must us.. read more
RachelReaper

4 Years Ago

oh... I see! Then awesome idea!
Very unique Pax. The visual artist in you and the writer merge to give birth to a very interesting, and profound piece. Well done/ Mr. pax

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your objective, Pax, in writing this poem is priceless and is achieved.

Balance does not only apply to the largest and the most important aspect in nature, it also applies even to the smallest part in a wide variety of contexts .

Federations, union, the government needs a system in which all competing influences are balanced, in order to have everything properly in place. I think Pax, with equilibrium, everything will be in great harmony.

Great intention. Great write:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, it kinda has a fantasy, magic like feel to it, which is good for the imagination. A great escape from reality into a world that swirls with wonders. Awesome job, Pax.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

4 Years Ago

my friend its nice to see you around... thank you so much..

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