Gothic Melancholia

Gothic Melancholia

A Poem by Pax
"

another melancholia musing.

"

 

 

 

Gothic Melancholia

 

The beautiful entity that hides in the walls of insecurities,

Drenched in septic opinions.

Purity in a brink of lost from the influence of invisible fears,

Drowning, almost - breathlessness…

Little bit of innocence and its essence, survived!

Making life still worthwhile.

 

 

 

 

written:

5/29/2014

© 2014 Pax


Author's Note

Pax
Credits to the photo to its respected owner, found in google images.


feeling vulnerable makes me sick easily. Now I'm sick(stomach pain, dirty water infection), feeling down, and growing old(birthday is coming,few more days.) :)

thanks for reading my friends, sorry if I am not arround much, I just don't feel well. Despite all that, I am still surviving life!

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I love the topic and the photo of Gothic cathedral...One of my favorite styles in architecture! Your poem gives really melancholia and little hopelessness, but as always comes to the conclusion of light and future...All around us is meaningful and worthy. We are pieces from the universe, and we need to stay in ourselves and do as much as possible for our inner beauty...We always have to express our essence and be true!

:: nour ::
Oct.23.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I love the topic and the photo of Gothic cathedral...One of my favorite styles in architecture! Your poem gives really melancholia and little hopelessness, but as always comes to the conclusion of light and future...All around us is meaningful and worthy. We are pieces from the universe, and we need to stay in ourselves and do as much as possible for our inner beauty...We always have to express our essence and be true!

:: nour ::
Oct.23.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really do feel you in this one bro, Birthday's make me sick too, I'm glad mine is over lol... there lays so much in between the lines and litterally in between your borders of how much you can hold, it's like there is the need to speak it out, as you do beautiful, and the water will stream over the quay- I wish you well my dear, I know times are difficult, and hard there. And I do love it you express yourself so beautiful, and all of your feelings in the written word. That helps a lot... thank you once again, for your visual art, you bring. ((HUGS)) such a sad, but beautiful perfect piece.

- Elisa

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

9 Years Ago

oh, you too? you know big sis, I am usually sickly in my childhood days as far as I remember, i thin.. read more

9 Years Ago

Thank you dear for giving me a peek into this story of your youth, ofcourse now I can imagine all..... read more
very beautiful and eloquently profound write, Sir Pax!

frail...yet compelling write...I also love the title to this poem.
I'm sorry to hear that you were sick....and my bd is next month...
I know how that feels.

thank you for sharing! :))

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much my friend, it is always good to see you.... i am doing fine now, hopefully the inf.. read more
ms. barrie

9 Years Ago

you're very welcome Pax, I hope it's not either! take care :)
This was great piece of writing, deep, dark and powerful. Hang on there while alive we all feel the same...what you are experiencing....

As always enjoyed your piece of art!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A. Amos

9 Years Ago

Always remember life is a b***h so f..k her like one, the one you start fearing...your history! Plea.. read more
Pax

9 Years Ago

thank you my friend, I appreaciate that with a big smile...
A. Amos

9 Years Ago

You're most welcome
"Purity in a brink of lost from the influence of invisible fears,
Drowning, almost - breathlessness…" so true, something to relate to. But remember, even in your darkest hour, have no fear for its essence is to measure what your made of and just like dusk ends and dawn breaks, it will pass.
hope you get well soon ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

9 Years Ago

I am doing good, its been the third day now and i think the ache is not there anymore, thank so you... read more
Wow .. how true, yes, the purity`s really hiding behind the mirrors of fears. I must say, you`ve painted a beautiful imagery here ... Beautiful poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Pax

9 Years Ago

you got that right my Wordsmith friend, Thank you very much... :)
Wórdsmíth

9 Years Ago

Your welcome, Pax. Oh, my friend, i`m sorry I neglected to wish you for your birthday ... here we .. read more
Pax

9 Years Ago

smiles, thanks, for being far away from my family, wc is great place to feel warm with their greetin.. read more
Lovely Pax. :)
There's always an ounce of hope even in dark times.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

9 Years Ago

yes, so true, indeed, thank you very much, An... :)
THat's an incredible picture. I'm sorry you're not feeling well. THis little poem shows your insecurities, the darkness in which you find yourself.

I think you're awfully young to be feeling old.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

9 Years Ago

yes, that photo led me to think that I really do like gothic architecture. Indeed my friend, it show.. read more
Short and succinct...we all have these days Pax, you've written it so aptly my sweet friend....Happy belated Birthday, I know the feeling well. xo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

9 Years Ago

ms. F... my good friend, it is so nice of you to come by, yes, I have those moments or we all have t.. read more
Frieda P

9 Years Ago

Do so hope you're over the hump, yes indeed we survive to fight another day and write poetry ;) Squ.. read more
Pax

9 Years Ago

a million smiles back at yah!
So true...just love yourself and stay away from toxic people...easier said than done but it is possible...Nevertheless, i truly enjoyed the read...hey, happy belated birthday my friend. May all your wishes come true.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Babe Roxx

9 Years Ago

Lol naks naman...talaga sensitive an Cancer lol but very good people...It will...in due time my frie.. read more
Pax

9 Years Ago

haha, medyo or minsan sensitive talaga..:D ....I kept my fingers cross for that... thanks Eve...
Babe Roxx

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome, Pax.

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