Darkness I

Darkness I

A Chapter by Pax
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My writings are my own darkness
my own little room
its a lonesome
space.

In here i crouch
and see the nothingness
as i drown myself 
in the stillness it brings
and the numbing 
silence
i surrender...



© 2016 Pax



Author's Note

Pax
Raw emotion

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We do have to find ourselves in light and darkness, in stillness and chaos. All are part of our learning and maturing experiences. Sometimes we retrieve what we lost and other times, we lose them forever. A dark but an excellent reflection, dear brother...:).......................

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

8 Months Ago

Ah, yes... you are as always very insightful and inspiring person ive meet and become a good brother.. read more
Sami Khalil

8 Months Ago

Wow. Thank you. Big hugs....:)))))



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There is a wonder and beauty even in the darkness of your soul, and you share with words and sacred silences. Thank you my friend.

Posted 2 Months Ago


We do have to find ourselves in light and darkness, in stillness and chaos. All are part of our learning and maturing experiences. Sometimes we retrieve what we lost and other times, we lose them forever. A dark but an excellent reflection, dear brother...:).......................

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

8 Months Ago

Ah, yes... you are as always very insightful and inspiring person ive meet and become a good brother.. read more
Sami Khalil

8 Months Ago

Wow. Thank you. Big hugs....:)))))
Deeply felt and well expressed.
Surrendering to one's self is a victory.
Excellent bit of work, Pax!

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

8 Months Ago

Thank you, Jimmy...
Very deep inside the shadows. I align within this write,Expression is good for you can sense what the meaning is within each word;-]

Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

8 Months Ago

thank you for all the reviews, dear friend...
It is poinate, it strikes the core of every writer what you are feeling is some thing we go through. Our work is to allow us to show others how we feel. The emotion is true and to the core. Believe you are worthy of the skill and the merit of being a writer. You are? Aren't you. Yes, you are. Believe.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

1 Year Ago

Thank you.
Richard Klpatric

1 Year Ago

The only thing, you have do is believe in yourself. You are trying to allow us to see this? Who you .. read more
very raw, and we have all at one point felt this, which is why we reach out to each other as poets, we understand this silence, embrace it even at times, surrender...just remember to get up again, open the windows and take a deep breath, and surround yourself with quiet beauty...as you are a poem with wings.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pax

1 Year Ago

you are beautiful as your words, dear friend... thank you.

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