the ocean

the greatest storm in the ocean dosen't prevent the regular incoming and outgoing tides. -Raymond Charles Barker

The ocean

Flows

Dances

Waves

Drifts

 

The ocean

Crashes

Pulls

Drags

Storms

 

The ocean

Shines

Glistens

Sings

Supports

 

The ocean

Drowns

Eats

kKlls

Tortures

 

The ocean

Sounds

A lot

Like

Life

Author's Note

the ocean kills and lives just like life. just got back from hampton that's my inspiration.

Reviews

[OtakuXC]

This is beautiful C:

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Simplicity and regarded wording, well penned, a good read.

[Judy Ponceby]

Wonderful descriptive words. I like the repetition of the ocean, almost like waves coming in, one after the other. Did you mean "drowns"? The comparison of something so vast as the ocean to life is awesome as well. Well done.

[Some Random Person.]

It's all true, though. Every word of it. Life is always killing and saving, just like the ocean.