Whispered Words

Whispered Words

A Poem by Christopher 'Windstorm' Kells

 

Whispered Words

By Windstorm Kells ©2008

 

Dancing candle flame

Thoughts lost in flickering stars

A Wren revealed choice

 

 

 

© 2008 Christopher 'Windstorm' Kells


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I am not sure of I understand the haiku, but it sounds as though it might be fascinating! Are the

concerned ones inside or outside? Is it daytime or night time?

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great Haiku!

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Posted 15 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quite Lovely in Haiku verse and so nicely penned~

THanks for sharing in the Haiku Contest~Fran Marie



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I love Haiku. This is certainly one of the best I have read.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this, my sort of writing. I like to think that thoughts have connection with stars. Indeed we make stars with our thoughts. That's what I believe. Nicely done.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To me it sounds a bit of divination : ) I liked this, the poem was extremely short but the wren at the end made me smile. A wren revealed choice, a bold choice to be made revealed by a bold candle flame.

Brette

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Christopher 'Windstorm' Kells
Christopher 'Windstorm' Kells

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