a life for a life

a life for a life

A Poem by Heather

life can be harsh as the unseen can see
a knife or a life can be used passionately
freedom, a word unknown as is its meaning
we wander searching for an unknown happiness even screaming
life is always changing maybe not for the good or for the better
thunder screams reflecting on our feelings and the weather 
whether we are dying or good doesn't matter
we are the minority they wouldn't look even if our brains were to shatter, scatter.

we stroll silently as we are the avoided the alone
people would still cross the street even if we were dead or turned to stone
we notice the the pain and anger inside of others
we see emotion from fathers and mothers
its wrong for somebody's to notice us nobody's at any time
it makes us stronger, more powerful, easier to plan and execute a crime
we are the unknown you ask the questions we can't answer
i find comfort in the shadows so I wouldn't know I'm no prancer,dancer.

© 2013 Heather


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Everybody has a story to tell and your voice speaks volumes on their behalf, as many others through choice, would choose to ignore!

A splendid, emotively, penned poem !

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

10 Years Ago

aww thanks that means a lot coming from you thank you!!! :)
Tom

10 Years Ago

You are very welcome !
Powerful write, but you never know who's watching.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

10 Years Ago

thank you and yes so very true
This has so much to it! Depth, amplitude, bound, all very nice. Love the first line the most!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

10 Years Ago

thank you i appreciate you taking the time to review :)
A very thought provoking poem. I like how you give the contrast and leave it to the reader for a solution...Splendid...:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heather

10 Years Ago

thanks again that's just what i was going for as the possibilities are endless thanks for reviewing!.. read more
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Good strategy . You are welcome...:)

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Heather
Heather

Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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