Now i see

Now i see

A Poem by Heather
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(found poetry)

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Why break pure, true people?
The horizon met it's first challenge, night.
Are the default settings really that wonderful?
Proud? Equal?
Devoted, stood the news of today.
The hazards within an opened debate that is found.
"A recognized achievement", they say.
The search for quality supports a concept.
Intimidation, found also as a cover for the dark fire.
The public know the cries of the ground,
Respect the duty to work.
Shy feather, why disturb the use of style? Diversity?
A main feature, an aim.

© 2014 Heather


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Nice thoughts. In today`s age, everything seemed rebellious with the variant hearts so, somehow.. this poem reflecting the peace of thoughts to get back freedom of living with "pleasure" as we lived a while long. Good to read!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wórdsmíth

9 Years Ago

Yeah.. love should be heard as long as it`s meant to be "heard"; "felt"; & "loved". Oh, thanks .. sw.. read more
Heather

9 Years Ago

I totally agree, we should express ourselves when we wish and not be judged because of it! I will ho.. read more
Wórdsmíth

9 Years Ago

I love the line: "hey! it takes a cool person to know a cool person!" xoxo ;)

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Heather
Heather

Birmingham, West Midlands, United Kingdom



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Well hello there. I'm Heather, I'm eighteen. Currently studying Creative and Professional Writing at the University of Derby. I can be quite harsh, and am quite the pessimist. I'm not a big people.. more..

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