there once was a time

there once was a time

A Poem by irrelevant
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fictional love poem ;)

"
there once was a time,
when i'd look in your eyes,
and be reassured,
that everythings alright.

there once was a time
when i'd hold your hands
we would cuddle all night
until the sunlight

there once was a time 
when we would be together
your soft lips against mine
reminded me of easy times

there once was a time
when i'd sit by your side
we would talk forever more
now suddenly i'm a bore

i never worked out 
why you had to cease
i just long to know
that you'll rest in peace




© 2014 irrelevant



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"there once was a time

when we would be together

your soft lips against mine

reminded me of easy times"

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A splendid poem. Thank you for sharing...:).....................

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

irrelevant

3 Years Ago

thanks man i appreciate it.
Sami Khalil

3 Years Ago

Much welcome...:)...............
I love how this sounds like the begining of a storybook; and how, at first, it sounds like a breakup, but then you realize why they're not together. Great job :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

irrelevant

3 Years Ago

thank you, much appreciated
Ifreakinloveyou

3 Years Ago

No problem :)

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3 Reviews
Added on April 6, 2014
Last Updated on April 6, 2014
Tags: love, death, peace

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A Poem by irrelevant