"Axiom of Life"

Axiom of Life

 

 

Looking for the majesties of life

 

Pondering the values betwixt wrong and right

 

Screaming my inward with no echo at all

 

Appearing outwardly large

 

Yet Indulged to be small

 

 

Human equation instructions of greater than

 

Conclusion of study records,

 

elations from lesser than

 

Journeying further away from this familiar existence

 

Yet still abounding here

 

hoarding paitence for resistence

 

 

Grasping silence in circumstance breathes compassion

 

"Voyaging the path unknown is

 

when special accomplishments happen"

 

Distractions deem understanding

 

At any given time fault may be reached

 

When the heart commands demanding

 

 

 

Urges fulfilled appear good at the time

 

To abstain from a good thing

 

stagnates the mind

 

"Breeze is for the soul carrying the unneeded"

 

"The use of ears is to know that silence is needed"

 

 

 

"Happiness of all can be succeeded by one"

 

"Treasures of bliss are earned not won"

 

"Apprehension is kin to a keen mind"

 

"Infinite diligence unrelenting to what is right"

 

"Accomplishment is a grand design"

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

This writing is pretty great. Such creativity, emotion, feeling, intensity and overall its insane. Awesome job dude!

-Will

[deeps]

"Happiness of all can be succeeded by one"
"Treasures of bliss are earned not won"
"Apprehension is kin to a keen mind"
"Infinite diligence unrelenting to what is right"
"Accomplishment is a grand design"


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