A beckoning can deform everyone

A beckoning can deform everyone

A Poem by wolfshrew
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Alive around Amelia, An alligator allegedly ate asprin. along...adieu animal.
Because bears break bodies, babies balance by bending backwards,beautifully.
Cory cant create certitude, clouds call cowardly, "clown!"
Dont decipher, dream daises. dream demise. dance dreadfully.
Ears elope, everyone engage!
Flee fleas, free from fake fountains...from fixatives.
Get going, graphic goons!
Harriet holds halos, her hands help heckling hooligans.
inane inamorata, if ill intentions inflict...it is isolation.
Jezebel jinxed justice, January just jumbled...just jumped.
kestrels kept kennelled, knavish kin-folk keep knick knacks.
Lesser levels lead leprechauns, ladies, lunatics...
Meltingpots move melodramatic memorandums
never never-land now near newts...novas notice nothingness.
octogenerians occupy orgies of off-the-wall OshKoshians
people popping pain-killers paint paisley patterns, pleasantly practice pedophelia.
pssst, playing Penny...pretty pre-teen..
quickie, quiet.
raunchy, reckless, relapsing rogue.
secretive sexuality surges serene Sara, sweet Sandra, scared Sally.
tomorrow they try to talk.
ugly ulcers, ultraconcervatives undermining us.
very vigilant, various velveteen veiled varment.
walkie-talkies waking Wesely, wearing women...wherever...whenever.
x-rated xylophonists
yell "yes!", you yea'say'ers...
zaftig zealots zigzag.

© 2009 wolfshrew


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chuckling here... sense seems to be as we find it - behind our eyes. An interesting point would be noticing how the reader would change some of the words' tense and form to still fit the patterns but smooth the flow.

Posted 8 Years Ago


wolfshrew

8 Years Ago

I sometime feel a swift feeling of panic that I keep writing here that I did in high school, but it'.. read more
Chris

8 Years Ago

Back then I made a language - then populated my mind with its speakers...

Our percept.. read more
Took me awhile to see the pattern, even the title A B C D E, A Beckoning Can Deform Everyone. The method of how you wrote this poem is highly original and I hope to use this frame of poem for my own poem, if that's okay. I probably will wait on doing it for a later date. 10/10.

Posted 14 Years Ago



Clever , but so is Wolfshrew.

You leave me gasping.

Bright, talented, unusual .

Rated: 100 %

----- Eagle CRuagh

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a fun and creative piece! Great job, and thanks for sharing it here.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Welcome to the Cafe. I must say this is totally different. I'm sorry to say I cheated, by the time I got to the 'J' line I had to skip down to see what you would come up with for X, Y and Z. Different, unusual, but very entertaining to perose.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

haha this was interesting and for some reason it made me laugh! (in a good way of course)

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh oh oh! I really like it I mean it to!
Not kidding alot of my writings are like this:D

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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