obey

and you shall be saved

make believe a coloring book
of indigo and garden seeds

drink
drink drink
he will take us through the ocean
 

a shack of we; i'm made from he
i read the words say, "come forward"


drink
drink drink
he will sail us through the ocean

mesh our souls
in mixing bowl
you are holy as me as he

drink
drink drink
he will bathe us in the ocean

a journey for blinded oils in the water with all our minds on pause;
to reality say goodbye and lets fly

drink
drink drink
he will blend us with the ocean

 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

Most of this is beyond my limit.
That is due to my limited comprehension
and is no reflection on the beauty and
wisdom offered in this poem.

Great Writing !

Rate-----100 %

----Eagle Cruagh

[Isolophobe]

Again, so very abstract though there is a lot of concrete imagery. You ensure the words are apart of the poem and don't orchestrate their own meaning. The mark of a true poet.