Back to Innocence

or the return to........ (Enigma)

as I age

closer to
my ice age
spring memories
spring back to mind

 

of flowering innocence

days when
squeaking seesaws were the thrill

and the heart swings
with the swing

 

smiling now
in hope

that like some

 

I flower

 

back
to innocence

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

i think this could happen or remain in one's imagination. it's nice to reminisce about the times of innocence but unfortunately we could never go back.

[Renée J. Martin]

What a sweet write! . I think people are continuously blooming...one petal at a time..and seesaws..who says they are just for children ( :

[Arte]

This is a very nice poem "flowering innocence" Don't we all wish to go back to our childhood? Thanks for sharing!

[Brittany]

This made me smile with my own childhood memories and carefree days...just as I now watch my daughter experiencing them. If we only knew then what we know now.

Suggestion: seasaws or seesaws?

[Wondering Mind]

Thank you for reading, and for your kind correction :)

[Corset]

you are just making me look bad, what I said in 1000 you said in 100 and did it better, lol.

[Wondering Mind]

Bad? In a good way... Your poetic style is adimrable my friend

[Corset]

aww thanks friend

[Pax]

indeed true, our memories springs back to mind like a swing and Reminisce the innocence of our good old days. great work my friend