Firstborn

Firstborn

A Chapter by Wondering Mind
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not the digital agency

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though soft and tender
the heart refuses
to be conquered

but may
in strong will surrender

 

mine
I give in essence
and will not assume yours

 

instead
like an expecting mother
I lovingly wait
for my firstborn

 



© 2012 Wondering Mind


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Stunning! Absolutely stunning!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Strong & tender
Freewill........
the greatest of these is Love...


Posted 11 Years Ago


This is so Sweet!...though strong willed, in essence surrendering to a soft and tender heart comes natural...especially firstborn. Beautiful!

Posted 11 Years Ago


The heart refuses to be conquered
but may
Well penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


so beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

11 Years Ago

in the eyes of the beholder :)
Emily B

11 Years Ago

the corinthians tells us: Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is .. read more
Wondering Mind

11 Years Ago

Thank you Emily...The closest that came to mind to the purity of Love which you have mentioned was t.. read more
i guess your love must grow into one another which takes patience and nurturing. it is selfless to say 'i give in essence and will not assume yours.'

Posted 11 Years Ago


You know, I've read this over several times, and I have come to the conclusion that this is quite beautiful actually.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Wondering Mind

11 Years Ago

Thanks...I didn't want to put on too much make up :)
Beautifully written, I like the structure and flow of this one :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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