My Epitaph

I have outlived you

the battle is forever lost

you can’t kill the dead

Reviews

[JelliFyshKissUs]

Not going to lie... had to look up Epitaph. Interesting. This makes me think of one seeking revenge but being cheated by death's interference. Or maybe death did him a favor instead? Hmm....

[Emily B]

I have lived several lives and hope to live several more. But I know that some battles are meant to be lost.

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. you bet!!! ... and i know exactly what you mean!!! ... when there's nothing more to lose, that's when we become invincible ...

[TAO]

you can if you forget them...almost like killing faerie creatures by not believing in them. Stark piece of work, and always worth the read.

[Ed Hart]

these words work too many ways to make any assumptions

[Marie Harrison]

Ha! This is funny.

[Liza]

true to form
ironies galore
intense

[emmah]

wow - this is great - a poem one can read - revisit again and again - and peel off a new layer - every single time!

nothing you can say
will justify the silence.
time to talk's over.