Winds of Change

Autumn- In two Essence verses- Each verse of two lines, each line six syllables with internal and end rhymes

trees sway to winds of change-

leaves play along the range

 

branches arch, the trees moan

naked larch rattles bones

Reviews

[TAO]

Be kind? I see not that there is a need; your work is awesome, to say the least. I'm coming to see you as...competition, now (don't take that the wrong way; my 'competition' is the means by which I am typically inspired - aside from my anger issues, that is). Very well done; short, sweet, and very pointed lesson in how much strength brevity itself can hold.

[em]

oh!! the winds of change always stir - your poem is like watching autumn in action - at sunset! - beautiful - inspiring - spellbinding - and multi-hued!

oh - i forgot i had to be kind!!! :P

[. serah .]

. i'm so sorry but i am incapable of kindness ... but this is brilliant ... it's smooth ... like warm whiskey with ginger ... and it hits ... like a tequila shot ... beautifully vivid poetry despite immense limitations ... :) ...

[Etcetera]

interesting