Hollow

The drum beats loud

and I may rock

or I may roll

hollow is what hollow does

but

strum on the fine strings of existence

and my soul will dance

Reviews

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BAM!!!

It must be nice to get a point across in so few words.
Creative thought's...

[Emily B]

this reminds me of my friend Zatoichi, he would love this write as I do

[Bubo]

Dance does make the soul come alive, and music.......sometimes it is the only thing reminding us we are alive :)
Loved it, such truth, and depth without alot of words needed.

[.]

. my brother once wrote these lines ...

i am nothing
nothing, in a nut shell
nothing in a nut shell
hollow fellow