Soon

screaming tones; yellow, red

Earth bursts flaming; Heaven cries

the year will soon end

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

Perfect, and well said....

[April Child]

Burst is such a great verb. The colours depict beauty but with the "screaming" and "crying" there is a different feeling about it. Usually a changing season is a beginning but here it is an end. Nice.

[em]

the year will soon end
and another will begin
colors unchanging

- beautiful poem - beautiful thought - beautiful colors - all in all - beautiful! :D

[.]

. yeah ... this is beautiful ... but some years never end ... they just yearn to end ...