Rain Down

It’s hard to 

pickup the pieces

when it’s so windy

 

I wish it would rain

 

may be then

they’d settle

or flow

or just ease into earth

 

It’s just so hard when it’s windy

Reviews

[Psycho-delic Shawn]

try harder, WM. rain isn't predicted to fall until next week.

[em]

- the wind - yea - it always does a good job scattering those scattered pieces even further - this is a masterpiece - i agree with serah - there's isn't much more to say - except a quiet prayer - for some gentle rain -

[India Brooks]

I love this, I really just bloody love this.

[. serah .]

. ohhh myyyy ... this ... now is a masterpiece ... profound beyond measure ... beautiful beyond measure ... overwhelming ...

[Lilly]

Yes music inspires...
This poem could fit into so many situations... I like it :)