The Poison

Team Renfield

If this,

sweet potion taste

leads fate

to expire

In love’s ecstasy

Then,

what care have I

for its poison?

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

I really enjoyed this piece here, very well said and very well written. Nicely written write.........

[Marie Harrison]

To die in love's sweet ecstacy, I can't think of a better way to die really.

[Norma M Sutton]

I like this.

[Closedown]

I love it. What more can I say? It's great. Renfieldians unite!

[Sonya]

Exquisitely written!

[My Fair Lady]

Ohhh.. poison potion of ecstasy

[JelliFyshKissUs]

This... is the greatest... poem of love... I have EVER read. FAVORITES!!!

[em]

- oh boy!!! - lethal this is - yes - what care should one have for its poison - if dying of love lies on the other side!!! -

but to die a happy man ;)

[.]

. ahhhhhhhhhhhhh ... that dart reached my heart ... ahhhhhhhhhh ... this is one of the most brilliant pieces of poetry i have ever read ... ever ... ever ... ever ... shine on you crazy diamond ...