Next Time

Team Renfield

O! Promises

of immortality

what morbid mortality

you meant

for me?

I must have a head of a cobia

signing my death warrant

twice-fold in a life time

A vampire, I rise

with Hemophobia

Next time

I’ll read the small print

Author's Note

Prompt: Vampire Write- No Cliché, I hope.
Cobia is a black King Fish with a flat head.
Hemophobia, Haemaphobia; The fear of blood

Reviews

[Unspoken poet]

creepy write, but so well written, enjoyed this.....

[Closedown]

Hahaha! I think Renfield himself would have done well to take that advice. Brilliantly funny. Renfieldians unite!

Yeh, that would be my kind of luck.

[Marie Harrison]

That would be me, I have a terrible fear of blood. I would make a horrible vampire. It's the color red. If it was any other color. It gives me the heeby jeebies even thinking about it. Clever poem!

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. bahahahahahaha! ... my eyes are watering ... this is sheer genius all the way ... every word ... every line ... you are a rocket launcher ... and you just proved it emphatically for the millionth time ... what a joy it is to read you ! ...