Shock-Star Rock

I feel another shock coming

Senses

make no sense

of this!

Nonesense!

Widowed dreams

walk with orphaned hopes.

Backwards,

to where the shock-star

rocks the house.

Reviews

[Pax]

Senses
make no sense
of this!
Nonesense!
~ those lines are very much clever and witty..
this is an enjoyable read!

[Poet Sayings]

"shock-star" that is crafty along with the rest of the meaning, the entire
poem plays of each perfectly written word, to me, shocks could be
great songs. you leave the meaning open, stunning, raw and eclipsing

[Corset]

There are an awful lot of unread poems on this site, this could take me all weekend,
ya know :) But I suppose I'll make time...something tells me it just might be worth a good saddle sore to two ;) rock on :)

[imagination101]

A poem with strong words and excellent imagery!

[Psycho-delic Shawn]

"Widowed dreams walk with orphaned hopes"--I love that image. Tells just how much weight they hold. This is why we have missed you sorely. A twist and turn of the psyche as only you can deliver it, WM.