In a Dream

We've walked together

you and I

hand-in-hand

in hazy fields of satin grass

 

alas

memory fails me

the when and where,

 

somewhere

 

along the word-stream

of your song

 

it must have been

a dream

Reviews

[Sasha Moser]

Nice poem. :D Very sweet.

[Ed Hart]

it's nice to have you in attendance...you're six poems overdue...but we'll allow that this one brings you up to date...another story in a few lines, bravo...sad, but who cares if the drink is strong

[Emily Burns]

so glad to see you've been inspired :)

[khalid]

very nice sweet image you have drawn here in simple nice way. i like it

[Kuhr Gred]

:) it is beautiful :)

[MOON]

As you say inspirational . Love how put this all together . The written word is key.

[Poet Sayings]

a dream within a dream, a desire given to enchantment, it is the muse
inspiring the poet to render a soft song of the ages, I really like the form
and sentence structure, this entire poem holds the imagination
in wonder, always a pleasure reading your great work ^_^