Treats

more than sweetness implied

despite the years
Time’s tainting trifles

 

and

my many times-over
“been there, done that”

 

the heart
still misses a beat
at your treats

Reviews

[EileenMarie]

That is a beautiful poem!

[paul]

great title, beautiful poem.

[Renée J. Martin]

And this is a.. gOOd ThAnG ! ( ;

[Emily Burns]

oh, oh . . .

[Frank James Davis]

For your sake--and, no doubt, to the utter delight of that particular object of your affections (here, perhaps, confections)--I am more than pleased at the rebirth of your amorous fervency. It made for a light and lovely bit of work.

[Pax]

short but has deeper meaning, the idea about time, sad and happy treats in moments we remember in time's passing. wonderful write my friend.

[Robbie]

Although "more than sweetness is implied", this is very sweet.... To have "been there, done that", and still have the heart feel that way is wonderful!... Nice write!