do not disturb any further

When I am still, it's not that I'm
pacific or content; for while
it may appear a quiet time,
with lips graced with a gentle smile,
a darkening meditation fills
the open space where demons roam
and angels hover for the kill;
I'm just about to write a poem.

Reviews

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~ wow... "angels hover for the kill" indeed... you write some of the best poems... :)

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I really enjoyed this pece

[Joel M Frye]

If I were cooking dinner at these times, ju, the smoke alone would do in the demons. ;)

[ju]

:) love this one. captures a moment- quiet drama. (i just get distracted and burn the dinner)

[Judy Ponceby]

Magnificent! :) Beautifully done. You have a way with words. :) LOL

[Audrey Howitt]

The point where the flow happens! You describe it well and the ending is wonderful and unexpected! Love it!

[LA Lorena]

what a marvelous way to describe it! I like this Joel, you've captured the spirit of inspiration!

[cfix]

This is wonderful, short and cute. I enjoyed this.