We as One

We as One

A Poem by wordman
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We together are as one

and forever we shall always be

fore I have touched your soul

and you have touched me

 

We we`re but a moment in time

but with enough memories to last a lifetime

and as the winds of time may blow

a sweeter love you shall never know

 

Yes I was but a moment in time

but I will be with you for a lifetime

and a sweeter love I shall never know

cause your always on my mind, 

as the winds of time gently blows

 

You brought me from a boy to a man

so forever in your debt I shall always be

because I touched you and you touched me

but fate just wouldn't let it be for you and me...


© 2017 wordman



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Hi W.M.
I noted that there was supposed to be 30 reviews (including this one of mines) but I only count 24.
6 phantom visits by the d*ck under assumed accounts, I guess...

anyways...the review
I felt the bittersweetness of a love lost despite being so full of promise. Tragic.
Well penned mate.

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

and you are right on both assumptions ,thank you
A nice poem on the lasting memories of young love.

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you norma for the review
Norma M Sutton

3 Months Ago

You are welcomed.
' You brought me from a boy to a man ~ so forever in your debt I shall always be.. ... '

We're so often more complete with memories and such inside of us. Such a fine reflection of however brief a relationship can be, it's sure to mark one's heart and spirit forever. Your words really touch..

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you em,appreciate the visit
Wonderful expression going through the experiences of life;-}

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you my friend
Weeping willow

5 Months Ago

Welcome my Poet friend ;-}
Though brief, 'twas a passionate and intense relationship that had an indelible effect on your persona !

Bittersweet indeed !

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you tom,wrote it about the movie but it is true in many ways
I liked the journey to proper ending. You took the reader with you to memories and lessons. A perfect ending to the excellent poetry my friend.
Coyote

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

ou re kind john,thank you
Coyote Poetry

5 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Positively romantic and sad at the same time Ron. The lyrics of lost love many of us relate to.

Posted 8 Months Ago


 wordman

8 Months Ago

thank you john !
You brought me from a boy to a man
so forever in your debt I shall always be
because I touched you and you touched me
but fate just wouldn't let it be for you and me...

This hit home. I recently seperated from a 16year relationship and I to was brought from a girl to a woman through my special partner though our marriage was not to last more than 10years we are still forever friends

Posted 8 Months Ago


 wordman

8 Months Ago

16 years is a long time,but maybe it just wasn`t meant to be.but i hope true love comes your way
read more
Ron, rereading some of your work to keep even with you on reviews. I really love this one. Valentine

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

but i know you always return the favor kathie,no problem

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