We as One

We together are as one

and forever we shall always be

fore I have touched your soul

and you have touched me

 

We we`re but a moment in time

but with enough memories to last a lifetime

and as the winds of time may blow

a sweeter love you shall never know

 

Yes I was but a moment in time

but I will be with you for a lifetime

and a sweeter love I shall never know

cause your always on my mind, 

as the winds of time gently blows

 

You brought me from a boy to a man

so forever in your debt I shall always be

because I touched you and you touched me

but fate just wouldn't let it be for you and me...

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Yes I was but a moment in time
but I will be with you for a lifetime
and a sweeter love I shall never know
cause your always on my mind,
as the winds of time gently blows

Sublime, Ron:)

[wordman]

thanks for the review pryde

[wordman]

this poem was actually wrote with the names of 5 other poems of mine
you guess the ones

[Sue Hart]

The sweetness of a love gone by. The growth it gives and remembered. Lovely.

[wordman]

thank you sue

[Julie]

Great poem very moving, the music was a great touch

[Im His Daughter]

ahhh a love you thought was perfect for all time only to be not the one at all.. I so know this very well... Very good poem!

[wordman]

if only in our minds

[Samuel Dickens]

Very sweet and romantic, speaking to the idea of perfectly-matched souls, entwined forever.

[wordman]

Samuel I really appreciate you stopping by my friend

[MsJewel]

Yes I was but a moment in time
but I will be with you for a lifetime
and a sweeter love I shall never know
cause your always on my mind,
as the winds of time gently blows
You write from the heart Ron and you have a beautiful heart my friend. This is lovely.
:) Julie

[wordman]

Julie you are too sweet but thanks for reading

[Joyce S. Greene]

Beautifully expressed memories of one you once cared for very much, Ron. As usual, your heart shines brightly in your words.

[wordman]

thank you joyce I actually had a relative in mind when I wrote it

[Ruth]

And a video too, smiles...
Beautiful work...that touch sure does stay and nestles ey? :)
x

[wordman]

thanks to you and my curiousity

[Ruth]

:) Good to know these things tho...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Amost romantic,heartfelt piece.I loved it a lot:)

[wordman]

and thank you again did the music help with the poem or not

[Vidya Bacchus]

It was a really nice together with the poem:)