Say You Love me too

Say You Love me too

A Poem by wordman

When I take your hand

and hold you tight

it will be forever,not just a night


I`ve searched for love

my whole life through

and then I met you


I looked deep into your eyes

down in to your soul and I knew

it would be you that I would hold


Hold close

deep into the night

making love feeling oh! so right


So please say that you love me

as I do you! say it baby

say I love you too...

© 2017 wordman


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Looks Like You Are Proposing To Someone! Your Poem Can Be Used To Propose Someone Sir G!

Posted 3 Years Ago


 wordman

3 Years Ago

thanks my friend for the visit
'Say You Love me too"
wordman,
Hi Ron,
Well this particular writing of yours flowed from a song as is the way of your creative process. As the song progressed and the words flowed I found myself thinking of the vulnerability of early meeting and then if it was possible all that is entailed. It seemed to be in levels or layers which led to the next step of awareness, of commitment. For commitment is planned and thought out. Love is a very big step and not taken so lightly. Infatuation is not love. I think that it is easy to fall in love with the idea of a selfish and one sided kind of relationship. There are no guarantees. It takes a lot of patience, kindess, waiting and just a willingness to not always be right. All that said I appreciate you for these kinds of writings because they are a place for pondering. More than I probably should I guess.
Thanks for hearing me out.
Bless You,
Kathy


Posted 3 Years Ago


 wordman

3 Years Ago

thank you kathy for the great review
Another romantic piece Ron accompanied by a song that takes me way back!

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

great song john,thanks for reading
Such a beautiful heartfelt piece of writing

Posted 7 Years Ago


 wordman

7 Years Ago

you are getting way back on my page,i am blushing
TeeJae {TJ} Hart

7 Years Ago

I scroll through the titles and read those that stand out to me :) you have some gorgeous work keep .. read more
 wordman

7 Years Ago

thank you,
Yes, the words I love you if meant are three of the most beautiful words in any language. Nice write..Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
Valentine

9 Years Ago

You are very welcome. Hope you are having a good day. Kathie
I love you too...the poem is romantic and lovely.

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you very much for the visit voices I love you too lol
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Good song and a beautiful poem for love. The words of love are the gifts we cannot forget. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


 wordman

9 Years Ago

thank you for the visit
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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Added on December 10, 2013
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 wordman
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just ask, golden glove boxer years ago,us army veteran ,a contractor is how i make my living, i am an amateur writer.. been here since june of 2013,couldn`t write then,still can`t.but who cares i .. more..

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