I Close my Eyes

I close my eyes and i drift away

 

into that magic place where you stay

 

 

In dreams you`ll always be mine

 

I can hold you until the end of time

 

 

I can hear those soft words you used to say

 

when you made love to me in that special way

 

 

In my dreams you will always be mine

 

in my dreams I’ll love you until the end of time

 

 

You still hold the keys to my heart

 

in my dreams we never part...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Tiana]

A beautiful poem ... Enjoy the gentle soft way of expressing your feelings.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Pryde Foltz]

In my dreams you will always be mine

in my dreams I’ll love you until the end of time


You still hold the keys to my heart

in my dreams we never part…

Oh to be able to hold onto these kinds of love. Wonderful write, Ron.

[wordman]

thank you for reading pryde

[Aethereal]

This is an adorable poem that inspires me to transpose your first two lines into my own unique style which you may keep as your own. The meter is 0/1/0/1 and each rhyme word is exact, it sings.: Sing along:

Drift

I close my eyes.
I drift away
to magic skies
where we may play.

[wordman]

and sings well,thanks

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! Most of the words used here are your words. All I did was make a style transposition. Meter and exact rhymes make this poem sing. I could have transposed your entire poem, but it’s your poem, not mine. I just wanted to show you what was gong on in my mind as I was reading your poem. You might want to turn most of your poems into songs some day.

[wordman]

yeah, I wish I could I tried it a few years ago they wanted to publish two but I had to pay for it and they would send me a tape

[zephyr]

Such a romantic write. I loved.

[wordman]

thanks for reading and friend req my pleasure I am a lost romantic

[Angie G]

This one touches my heart because I'm in that place in my dreams.. Thank you Wordman.. you have a way of writing what's in my soul..

[wordman]

I appreciate your comment and I hate the fact that your living it it`s hard to lose a loved one maybe it will work out I hope so

[Latifa]

I close my eyes and i drift away

into that magic place where you stay
I like the opening lines, thank you for sharing the wonderful write.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[A. Amos]

You still hold the keys to my heart

in my dreams we never part

Ron as I mention you when my mind is tired of writing my books, I have to come to your page to find peace and harmony for my soul.... you poetry is kind of spiritual healing for me my friend and I love the choice of music...

[wordman]

amos I am honered that you stopped in