My Last Sunset

4 th place in the porerful story contest

Author's Note

Reviews

[Rana]

Such simple words woven together to bring out such powerful emotion. This is an extremely lovely poem wherein the inevitable end has been accepted with amazing grace. Adorable imagination here, I've never seen the sunset being described so beautifully.

[wordman]

you are very kind,i appreciate your review

[Rita L. Sev]

This is really beautiful, a message for anyone who has lost a loved one... Wonderful imagery. Nature gives us her all, doesn't she? Excellent write, Wordman.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[ANTO]

I agree with the lovely Kathie here Ron. This is one of, if not THE best write of yours, that I've had the pleasure to read. Perfect from start to finish. Bravo my friend !
:))

[wordman]

thank you anto ,I appreciate your visit

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This really quite lovely and sad. I know that from the day we are born and on we are dying, but what made think to write this, Ron?

[wordman]

I don`t know lynn,it seems all my writes are just handed to me.i guess it`s just your state of mind

[wordman]

well 3 heart attacks,chronic kidney disease,corniary artiery disease,ptsd chronic,depression,
osto arthritis ,knee replacement due,acid reflux,stroke likely ,over weight,border line diabetic

[...]

OMG, please start taking care of yourself!

[wordman]

thank you lynn,you are sweet

[Valentine]

This is beautiful, one of your best writes. I love the picture too. Well done. Valentine

[wordman]

the picture really sets the mood for the poem,thank you for the visit

[Fallon Estrello]

How did you post your poem like that, I've tired and it won't let me

[wordman]

I place the picture in my picture file click edit ,use paint for my edit
at the bottom of your poem field you have several icons one says image click on it and go to picture file and pull it out

[Sami Khalil]

You carried us into that last sunset with your wonderful imagery and spirituality of death. Beautiful video to accompany the poem...Excellent...:)....

[wordman]

thank you Sami, appreciate your visit

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)......