My Last Sunset

4 th place in the porerful story contest

Author's Note

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Great piece brother, going to my favorites! Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[wordman]

thought you might like it,thanks

[Blue Sunshine]

Such excellent touch. I sure felt the spiritual love in this.perfect my friend just perfect.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit was it unger

[Blue Sunshine]

Yes. That's my last name. How you remember that Ron?

[wordman]

i am smart

[Blue Sunshine]

Aren't we all smart only through Jesus eyes.

[wordman]

sometimes i wonder about that i think i`m a red headed step child lol

[Pryde Foltz]

What a lovely thought that upon a death a poet will paint the sky rather than the paper. Beautiful write, Ron.

[wordman]

you are too sweet,thanks

[Erik Daniel]

Another gem. There is such beauty in your poems! This reminded me a little of my poem "The Martyr's Prayer" about the stoning of Stephen. You should check it out!

[wordman]

thanks send rr so I can find it

[Erik Daniel]

Ok. Its sent!

[maria ( rose)]

Beautiful and spiritual piece. The singer gave me a chill, he has an awesome voice .

[wordman]

thank you for stopping by

[maria ( rose)]

your welcome :)

[athena]

both the voice and the images depict a depth of sublimity that can be found only in the hereafter

[wordman]

thank you for reading the picture turned out better than I expected

[Caradoc]

This about brought a tear to my eye. Very well written. This is an excellent piece. Thank you for sharing it with us.

-Caradoc

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[A. Amos]

I absolutely love those verses,  very relateable! amazingly written and well expressed. 

[wordman]

two visits,i am honored

[A. Amos]

Why not my friend, I enjoy reading your work

[A. Amos]

You gave man on dying bed, a moment to die proudly and with conveying his last message. Wonderful write, emotional yet powerful. Respect

[wordman]

thanks for reading,this is the only way to go just sail away into the sunset

[A. Amos]

Agree my friend nothing more like it.....

[Brittany Zedalis]

This is just downright beautiful. It's sad in a way, but the way you wrote it makes death not seem so bad.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Madison O'Dwyer]

Wow, this poem had so many great aspects. A lovely rhythm and flow, the rhyme scheme. I loved the rawness of the words, and the honesty. Thanks for sharing :)

[wordman]

thank you for taking the time to read and comment,and thank you for the req it is my pleasure

Ron