A Silent Tear

A Silent Tear

A Poem by wordman
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It seems i have fallen from your grace

i no longer see your face

so i sit to write but the words wont come


Tears roll down my face

it seems i have fallen from your grace

down trodden and all alone

no one to call up on


A deaf ear has now taken the place

of my god and his grace

though i walk through the valley of death

i do fear evil i feel alone my heart cold

and out of place


On my knees

on my face

praying to god to once

more show me his face


But not a sound

do i hear

only feel the warmth

of a single tear...


© 2016 wordman



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 wordman
will ad music when i can find one to match

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Tears are clensing you know, and perhaps that is the silent voice of God's grace. Touching, God, and you...

Posted 10 Months Ago


 wordman

10 Months Ago

so many people cry out without an answer,this kinda portrays that emotion..thank you for gracing my .. read more
Very touching, a perfect description of how it feels when you walk away form God.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the review
.........a superb write ★

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

a pleasant surprise,thank you for the review
I just re-read this one....so very very beautiful Ron!

Posted 2 Years Ago


A lonely cry is highlighted with a tear.....exceptional write! Thank you for sharing your talent.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit,
The fall from grace.... narrated in great style....

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you suri
this is beautifully sad! the reader can feel the strength and impact of despair and the plea / urge to be rescued! well done!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you indra
Indra Neil

2 Years Ago

u r welcome!
A sad story, beautifully told.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you,this is where a lot of us come from
feeling unworthy or forgotten; an outward plea, of sorts, that ends with a little dampness of home in that single "warm tear"... perhaps he was in the warmth of that tear... a nice write, Ron

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Added on November 27, 2014
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