Misty Blue

Misty Blue

A Poem by wordman
"

gold in the one way love contest

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It`s been  a long time baby!

you were on my mind

thought I would drop you a line


You know baby!

I`m still in love with you

and on day`s like this honey

I just feel misty blue


Baby it`s been a long time

since I held you tight

and I hope this letter

finds you all right


You know baby that I miss you

and I dream of you from time to time

and on those day`s honey

I have to drop you a line


But then I tear them up

and I throw them away

I wouldn't know where to mail

them to any way....







© 2016 wordman



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Your words flow so warmly and sincerely. I suspect touches of true heart speak calling out to be heard. Beautiful sadness.

Plus, your poem happily echos the song's lyrics.. one of my all time favourites.

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you em,they all come from somewhere
I think you captured that misty blue to perfection Wordman, the last verse is a killer.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you mr nemo,i appreciate your visit !
Lorry.

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome.
This is very well-stated & relatable . . . I've felt this way many times. I think people we've grown connected to, & then grown away from, are always lingering on our minds this way. I love how your message suggests we can take out such a memory, spend a little time expressing the feelings, then throw away the words and move on once again. We often have to do this over & over in life. It's just as well we don't know where to send our thoughts, becuz most of the time, it's a futile exercise anyway. Thanks for sharing this true-to-life vignette.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you margie for stopping by!
ahhh love the ending....kind of nebulous and soft....beautiful write as always Ron.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

got to write that pain jane,life is full of it.a friend of mine said i was the hank williams of poet.. read more
a beautifully composed poignant write! well done and all the best! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you indra,been working too much let my poetry slide
Indra Neil

2 Years Ago

u r welcome! :)
some people we never forget because they leave such a large part of themselves behind while taking some of us with them... there is love and sadness in this write, Ron...nicely-done

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you my friend,was just putting the contest results on it
Once in love, always in love I think
Good one...

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank`s was just posting the contest results on it

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Added on March 28, 2015
Last Updated on July 30, 2016
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