Misty Blue

Misty Blue

A Poem by wordman
"

gold in the one way love contest

"

It`s been  a long time baby!

you were on my mind

thought I would drop you a line


You know baby!

I`m still in love with you

and on day`s like this honey

I just feel misty blue


Baby it`s been a long time

since I held you tight

and I hope this letter

finds you all right


You know baby that I miss you

and I dream of you from time to time

and on those day`s honey

I have to drop you a line


But then I tear them up

and I throw them away

I wouldn't know where to mail

them to any way....







© 2016 wordman



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Your words flow so warmly and sincerely. I suspect touches of true heart speak calling out to be heard. Beautiful sadness.

Plus, your poem happily echos the song's lyrics.. one of my all time favourites.

Posted 11 Months Ago


 wordman

11 Months Ago

thank you em,they all come from somewhere
I think you captured that misty blue to perfection Wordman, the last verse is a killer.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you mr nemo,i appreciate your visit !
Lorry 4.9

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome.
This is very well-stated & relatable . . . I've felt this way many times. I think people we've grown connected to, & then grown away from, are always lingering on our minds this way. I love how your message suggests we can take out such a memory, spend a little time expressing the feelings, then throw away the words and move on once again. We often have to do this over & over in life. It's just as well we don't know where to send our thoughts, becuz most of the time, it's a futile exercise anyway. Thanks for sharing this true-to-life vignette.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you margie for stopping by!
ahhh love the ending....kind of nebulous and soft....beautiful write as always Ron.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

got to write that pain jane,life is full of it.a friend of mine said i was the hank williams of poet.. read more
a beautifully composed poignant write! well done and all the best! :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you indra,been working too much let my poetry slide
Indra Neil

2 Years Ago

u r welcome! :)
some people we never forget because they leave such a large part of themselves behind while taking some of us with them... there is love and sadness in this write, Ron...nicely-done

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you my friend,was just putting the contest results on it
Once in love, always in love I think
Good one...

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank`s was just posting the contest results on it

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