Rainy Night in Georgia

Rainy Night in Georgia

A Poem by wordman
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Color me gray
as the sky fades to black
color me sad
on this cold rainy night

Rainy night in georgia
takes a toll,
as the rain
falls on my soul

I miss you sweet heart
i need you to hold
i need you to touch me baby
touch my soul

I guess 
i should have never let you go
now i feel you sweet heart
deep down in my soul

You see 
true love never dies
and as i stand here in the rain
my heart still cries ...



© 2017 wordman



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A lovely poem indeed.

A couple suggestions?
All your stanzas have an ABCB rhyme scheme except for the first one. You might want to change the last line in that 1st stanza to something like, "I want my sweetheart back"

Also, I know spelling doesn't count in poetry, in fact, you can even make up your own words, but the last word on the last line should be cries.



Posted 2 Years Ago


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Jesus & Gypsy Soul

2 Years Ago

Great critiquing. I need to learn these scales too.
 wordman

2 Years Ago

just let it come from the heart,break the rules
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A lovely poem indeed.

A couple suggestions?
All your stanzas have an ABCB rhyme scheme except for the first one. You might want to change the last line in that 1st stanza to something like, "I want my sweetheart back"

Also, I know spelling doesn't count in poetry, in fact, you can even make up your own words, but the last word on the last line should be cries.



Posted 2 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Jesus & Gypsy Soul

2 Years Ago

Great critiquing. I need to learn these scales too.
 wordman

2 Years Ago

just let it come from the heart,break the rules
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I let you go
and now my heart is broken
The rain is falling,
now I'm crying
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And now I wanna go to Georgia to see the cold rainy night. It's just that there are times that the rain keeps on reminding us of people we should have never let go.

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit !
Aprille

2 Years Ago

my pleasure. :)
A very romantic. There is always something that brings that special someone to mind, that someone who we should have never let go. If only......haunt. Fabulous write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you for the visit !
somehow that special person is always remembered when it rains
a relief

well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you very much riversided,good to see you !
HansJizzy and ANTO are one and the same. ANTO blocked someone who had never commented on his stuff, at exactly the same time as HansJizzy did.

avoid! avoid!

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

anto is not hans jizzy aka t k little aka david demers,you have one post and one friend
you d.. read more
Great read and thanks especially for introducing me to this song. It's so good.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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SKY
People say love hurts if lost. I feel love really hurts, when its rain falling like skyafall....
Beuatiful Poem Wordman :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

thank you very much !
Great write Wordman. Keep it up

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

and how are you my friend ! thanks
Terrence Chang

2 Years Ago

I am fine and dandy
Returning to ask for a new write Ron. This one was written in December. I'm having withdrawal pains! ~SP

Posted 2 Years Ago


 wordman

2 Years Ago

i am dried up sharon ! no inspiration ,maybe you could give me a start

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