Sweet Dreams

Sweet Dreams

A Poem by wordman
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I go to bed,
with you, on my mind.
and i dream ,dream of,
what could have been mine.

sweet,sweet dreams,
i have of you!
but sweet dreams
is all i have of you.

sweet,sweet love
brought to my heart
from above

then put,to a poets pen
to fill my heart
with love,yet once again...

© 2017 wordman



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Hey Wordman.......awesome romantic ink.......dreams keep you deep inside your luvs hug thru the night.....very peaceful ink......purple luv & hugs xo :)

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you,i am honered
Writing invokes feelings and your poem portrayed that perfectly.
A sweet and lovable poem.
Great work:)

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
Neetha

6 Months Ago

My pleasure
Well written poem! I enjoyed the deeper meaning. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 8 Months Ago


 wordman

8 Months Ago

thank`s for the visit paul,good to meet you !
Paul

8 Months Ago

Likewise! I look forward to reading more of your poetry!
sweet,sweet dreams,
i have of you!
but sweet dreams
is all i have of you.
Very thoughtful lines. It shows that true feeling that you see her in your dreams but you only see in in your dreams. Beautifully written loved it.

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

thank you najam
Najam Us Saher

9 Months Ago

No need of thanks :)
sweet,sweet love
brought to my heart
from above

then put,to a poets pen
to fill my heart
with love,yet once again...

A beautifully penned poem with a deeper message. No love is in vain. The best ink flows from pain.

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

you can`t feel love without feeling pain,thank you for reading
DIVYA

9 Months Ago

I agree totally. You are most welcome!
The repetition of 'sweet' really brings out the feeling in this. Guess there are many different ways to love someone, even from afar. A nice heart-felt write for sure.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you pete,appreciate your review
A poet's heart, love penned down, heart reunites with beloved within mind.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the review
great work, i like the flow and the simplicity

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

i like your review ..
This is indeed sweet. It has the perfect flow and you take a breath at the exact right moment you should. Love it. Nicely done.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the kind words,i really appreciate it.
it's always good to read your stuff. nicely written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you bo !

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