Sweet Dreams

I go to bed,

with you, on my mind.

and i dream ,dream of,

what could have been mine.

sweet,sweet dreams,

i have of you!

but sweet dreams

is all i have of you.

sweet,sweet love

brought to my heart

from above

then put,to a poets pen

to fill my heart

with love,yet once again...

Reviews

[Shi-Ann L.]

I love how you put so much emotion into such a small piece. I think we can all agree that we feel your pain.

[wordman]

thank you for the review

[θεά]

This is a simple poem without claiming to be anything else. The message is direct and doesn't beat about the bush. Keep writing. Best, M.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A beautiful and delicate piece that keeps the reader on edge without fright, well done good read

[wordman]

thank you thomas,appreciate the visit

[Sarah]

Sad, sad poem with beautiful prose. Well done, my friend.

[wordman]

thank you sarah,this poem came from the song,and the verse about a poets pen

[Miss Sharon]

(((RON))) This one chokes me up. You write so well my friend. ~Sharon

[wordman]

thank you sharon !

[Miss Sharon]

;>) Always my pleasure! ~Sharon

[Lorry]

Beautifully written. Sad and poignant memories. Thank you for sharing.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !

[Paul Bell]

Always sad when someone you love passes. But the poets pen brings back the good times. Good to see you. Gaffer.

[wordman]

good to see you back,thanks

[emmajoy]

'.. .. put to a poets pen -- to fill my heart -- with love, yet once again... '

Even those sweet, sweet dreams fill the heart.. so precious, always will be. Your words nudge my own similar thoughts.. guess quite a few of your Friends will say the same. Thank you so much for sharing..

[wordman]

thank you for the visit emmajoy,always appreciated

[emmajoy]

you're welcome..

[Valentine]

I just thank God for those dream visits. Kathie

[wordman]

thank`s for the visit