You Touch Me

I touched you,

last night .

your skin so soft,

as i caressed your soul.

Your lips

wet,and sweet,

when we`re together,

i feel complete.

You touch me,

i explode inside,

my feelings for you,

i could never hide.

I touched you,

last night.

and you,

you touched me...

Reviews

[sette]

what more can i say? it clearly speaks about the love of a man for his woman. in this poem it is more on the side of the man to express how to love and what is to love. very good writing

[wordman]

true love makes all the difference,love is elevated to a new level

[...]

Talented poem from talented poet. Well done.

[wordman]

i am homered,thank you

[motley poetry (special ..]

Very touching. You can feel the emotion.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Girl With A Pen]

A very deep write, explaining love going deeper than touch and emotions being more than just feelings

[wordman]

thank you for the visit,i appreciate it

[Scerina Elizabeth]

Beautifully written and so in depth

[wordman]

thank you for the review

[Scerina Elizabeth]

Your very welcome :)

[APOORVA]

this one is amazing i tell you. very sweet and innocent and filled with love

[wordman]

you are to kind,thank you !

[TeeJae {TJ} Hart]

This is beautiful I bet she is a lucky lady

[wordman]

t j i thank you again ! you know a poet is only a myth

[TeeJae {TJ} Hart]

Sometimes a myth can also hold a deeper meaning

[wordman]

a myth with a pots pen

[Sikandar Khan]

So Nice It Reminds Me Of My Lover.......HEr Beautiful Eyes......

[wordman]

her eyes are the mirror of her soul,letting you see into her soul,,thank you for the visit

[DIVYA]

This passion-filled piece stands out for its simple, sweet verses, the completness of expression.

[wordman]

thank you divia

[DIVYA]

Its such a pleasure!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A gentle but emotion packed love story in a crisp set of stanzas Ron.

[wordman]

thank you john !