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This is my first attempt at slam poetry, and I'm excited to film a performance of this piece over the coming day.
Lay me down,by your side

Lay me down,by your side

A Poem by wordman
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I want to,
lay down by your side;
feel the warmth,
from your heart.

Feel your love,feel your pain,
as it flows,
from your soul,
in to mine.

want to,
lay down,
by your side.

Hold you close,
your body next to mine,
feel your love,
till i die...


© 2016 wordman



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A short sweet love story. I like the repetition of the line "I want to lay down by your side." Very nice!

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you for stopping by
Lori Brown Boniciolli

6 Months Ago

Very welcome!
 wordman

6 Months Ago

looks like u got it
Feel your love,feel your pain,
as it flows,
from your soul,
in to mine.

My favorite lines...conveying the love comes so naturally and easily to you...

Posted 7 Months Ago


 wordman

7 Months Ago

thank you very much
DIVYA

7 Months Ago

You are welcome
This is breathtaking in it's brief simplicity... Made me think of the song, "Lay Me Down" by Sam Smith. Sometimes we need only just a few words to leave such an impact as this sweet piece had done. It's just so sincere. And so selfless. Asking of nothing but only to hold the one near and dear to a heart, to know of their love until death should have you... Just sigh... Such romance in the little things. Love your song choice as well for this. Suits it so well. Was just a joy to read, wordman.

Posted 8 Months Ago


 wordman

8 Months Ago

i appreciate your visit,and thank you for the beautiful review
Beautiful Intentions

8 Months Ago

So welcome!:)
I like Willie Nelson, his music is laid back especially when driving long distance , i could ,listen to his songs all day, nice tribute

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

thank you,and he is just laid back and down to earth
Anyway Ron this is a romantic write one for lovers to share.

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

thank`s john,,missed this one
Beautiful poetry for love. The song is very good also. Gentle words led reader to the good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

thank you for reading john,always appreciated
Coyote Poetry

9 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
Ron the post below is KT Little. Block him!

Posted 9 Months Ago


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blissful read for me...we really can survive the fiery storms of youth and hormones that rage ...and this is the substance we really need and desire ..well said wordman! yes indeed!
E.

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

thank you for the visit my friend
This speaks of not only the good but holding the pain also, a special bonding that is true love, beautiful...

Posted 9 Months Ago


 wordman

9 Months Ago

you have to take both for it to work,thank you !

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