Silence

Silence

A Poem by wordman
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Silence
rolling through my brain,
as fast,
as a fast moving train.
 
Through,
the portals,
of my mind ,taking me back,
back in time.
 
Where
memories run deep,
deep into my soul,
a place,only i can go.
 
like
a waterfall,
falling from my mind,
taking me back, back in time...

 


© 2017 wordman



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Time is where we go when the world fails to show only that which we know🌹

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

well time is a healer,thank you for the visit
The comfort of our thoughts, ours to see and ours to remember. Very well done!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you ! appreciate the review
Human beings live lives haunted by the past; a time, apparently, that refuses to go away.
Lovely bit of work.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the nice comment
I really enjoy the poetic feel of this write. I like the second to last stanza, simply a real beautiful write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visi
Very nicely written. Beautiful

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit
Many people can relate to this poem. I like your word choices of "portals of my mind". You picked a great song to accompany your poem.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading
So well written Wordman. We all need time to delve into the silence and remember the things that make us happy.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

appreciate the visit,we all need that time i guess
Love the flow of words, the repetition really adds to the effect. The cascade of memories, once it starts pouring it floods the mind...Beautifully written!

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

i appreciate your visit
Sometimes that's all we need.

Not only do these words read well, they also look good on the page.Worth every one of the 35 reviews to date & am sure there will yet be more. Now I'm gonna shut up...

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you for the visit, maybe it will

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