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Silence

Silence

A Poem by wordman
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Silence
rolling through my brain,
as fast,
as a fast moving train.
 
Through,
the portals,
of my mind ,taking me back,
back in time.
 
Where
memories run deep,
deep into my soul,
a place,only i can go.
 
like
a waterfall,
falling from my mind,
taking me back, back in time...

 


© 2017 wordman



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This can be a song haha. Just put some music in the background :3 However, loved it :D

Posted 5 Days Ago


 wordman

5 Days Ago

thank you for reading
I like the contrast here. I definitely connect with silence seeming louder than noise. Sometimes it would be easier to run some background noise rather than listen to my own mind.

Posted 5 Days Ago


 wordman

5 Days Ago

thank you for the visit
I like how you used water as one of the symbols for the memories because sometimes they can all start to hit you at once sort of like rain, or they can trickle back slowly like water out of a faucet. It was really a clever way to talk about how they actually pop up into the mind.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit
Time is where we go when the world fails to show only that which we know🌹

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

well time is a healer,thank you for the visit
The comfort of our thoughts, ours to see and ours to remember. Very well done!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

7 Months Ago

thank you ! appreciate the review
Human beings live lives haunted by the past; a time, apparently, that refuses to go away.
Lovely bit of work.

Posted 7 Months Ago


 wordman

7 Months Ago

thank you for the nice comment
I really enjoy the poetic feel of this write. I like the second to last stanza, simply a real beautiful write.

Posted 7 Months Ago


 wordman

7 Months Ago

thank you for the visi
Very nicely written. Beautiful

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

7 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
Many people can relate to this poem. I like your word choices of "portals of my mind". You picked a great song to accompany your poem.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

7 Months Ago

thank you for reading
So well written Wordman. We all need time to delve into the silence and remember the things that make us happy.

Posted 8 Months Ago


 wordman

8 Months Ago

appreciate the visit,we all need that time i guess

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