Silence

Silence

A Poem by wordman
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Silence
rolling through my brain,
as fast,
as a fast moving train.
 
Through,
the portals,
of my mind ,taking me back,
back in time.
 
Where
memories run deep,
deep into my soul,
a place,only i can go.
 
like
a waterfall,
falling from my mind,
taking me back, back in time...

 


© 2017 wordman



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So well written Wordman. We all need time to delve into the silence and remember the things that make us happy.

Posted 1 Day Ago


 wordman

1 Day Ago

appreciate the visit,we all need that time i guess
Love the flow of words, the repetition really adds to the effect. The cascade of memories, once it starts pouring it floods the mind...Beautifully written!

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


 wordman

4 Weeks Ago

i appreciate your visit
Sometimes that's all we need.

Not only do these words read well, they also look good on the page.Worth every one of the 35 reviews to date & am sure there will yet be more. Now I'm gonna shut up...

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the visit, maybe it will
.....very beautiful, so pleased I came to this site ★

Posted 4 Months Ago


sunprincess

4 Months Ago

......I've always loved adding photos, this helps bring the poem alive ★ like when I read "Silence.. read more
 wordman

4 Months Ago

yeah,that`s why hello poetry does not have a lot of poets there
sunprincess

4 Months Ago

.....the site doesn't have much too keep anyone interested ★
That beautiful gift u have just keeps on giving Hun!! Beautiful work.

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

just words,thank you again
Creative...Very true and thoughtful poem.

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
Najam Us Saher

4 Months Ago

You are most welcome.
This is captivating Wordman ... I look to see more from you soon ...

Posted 4 Months Ago


Farmgirl

4 Months Ago

I noticed ... But, I believe a piece is coming soon ...
 wordman

4 Months Ago

i think something is transforming in me
Farmgirl

4 Months Ago

I know it is ... You just have to Let it go & release it no matter how difficult the words are to ty.. read more
that waterfall never stops running...

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

you don`t need to remind me my friend,,thank`s
Aloha wordman, a beautiful dreamy piece. There's a real contentment in your words. Lovely read. Izzy

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you for the visit izzy !

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