Silence

Silence

A Poem by wordman
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Silence
rolling through my brain,
as fast,
as a fast moving train.
 
Through,
the portals,
of my mind ,taking me back,
back in time.
 
Where
memories run deep,
deep into my soul,
a place,only i can go.
 
like
a waterfall,
falling from my mind,
taking me back, back in time...

 


© 2017 wordman



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Silence can give your mind time to try bring up buried memories at exactly the wrong time or allow you to over analyse a situation till anxiety has you seraching for soluition to problems that arnt really all that important. We can be our own worst enemy at times. I like how you express yourself here . Well done!

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

sometimes this is the best medicine,thanks for the visit
Loved this poem. Gave me comfort and a bit of peace reading it. Bless you, Ron.

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you dawn,we all need peace
Dawn

4 Months Ago

I agree whole heartly with you Ron. You gave me that in your poem. Thank Ron for being just you Ron... read more
Yes my friend, the silence has the loudest of sounds and voices, Your inner voice lingers there if You are aware, able to listen to it, Your poem is wonderfully written, with sentimental emotions, the end for me is amazing, because when You go deep into Your inner and reach a certain point, some things might come as a waterfall.

I very much like Your style, it's simple, and have a very lovely musical tune as I've said, it flows to our ears so smoothly and sweetly.

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you for the sweet and kind review
This can be a song haha. Just put some music in the background :3 However, loved it :D

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you for reading
I like the contrast here. I definitely connect with silence seeming louder than noise. Sometimes it would be easier to run some background noise rather than listen to my own mind.

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
I like how you used water as one of the symbols for the memories because sometimes they can all start to hit you at once sort of like rain, or they can trickle back slowly like water out of a faucet. It was really a clever way to talk about how they actually pop up into the mind.

Posted 6 Months Ago


 wordman

6 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
Time is where we go when the world fails to show only that which we know🌹

Posted 11 Months Ago


 wordman

11 Months Ago

well time is a healer,thank you for the visit
The comfort of our thoughts, ours to see and ours to remember. Very well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you ! appreciate the review
Human beings live lives haunted by the past; a time, apparently, that refuses to go away.
Lovely bit of work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the nice comment
I really enjoy the poetic feel of this write. I like the second to last stanza, simply a real beautiful write.

Posted 1 Year Ago


 wordman

1 Year Ago

thank you for the visi

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