Silence

 

Silence

rolling through my brain,

as fast,

as a fast moving train.

 

Through,

the portals,

of my mind ,taking me back,

back in time.

 

Where

memories run deep,

deep into my soul,

a place,only i can go.

 

like

a waterfall,

falling from my mind,

taking me back, back in time...

 

Reviews

[Taino]

The comfort of our thoughts, ours to see and ours to remember. Very well done!

[wordman]

thank you ! appreciate the review

[FJ Davis]

Human beings live lives haunted by the past; a time, apparently, that refuses to go away.
Lovely bit of work.

[wordman]

thank you for the nice comment

[Rye]

I really enjoy the poetic feel of this write. I like the second to last stanza, simply a real beautiful write.

[wordman]

thank you for the visi

[Open mind]

Very nicely written. Beautiful

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Barbara Walker]

Many people can relate to this poem. I like your word choices of "portals of my mind". You picked a great song to accompany your poem.

[wordman]

thank you for reading

[Relic]

So well written Wordman. We all need time to delve into the silence and remember the things that make us happy.

[wordman]

appreciate the visit,we all need that time i guess

[nefalnumair]

Love the flow of words, the repetition really adds to the effect. The cascade of memories, once it starts pouring it floods the mind...Beautifully written!

[wordman]

i appreciate your visit

[Neville]

Sometimes that's all we need.

Not only do these words read well, they also look good on the page.Worth every one of the 35 reviews to date & am sure there will yet be more. Now I'm gonna shut up...

[wordman]

thank you for the visit, maybe it will

[sunprincess]

.....very beautiful, so pleased I came to this site ★

[wordman]

glad you did to,thank you

[sunprincess]

.....I had forgotten this site is more creative ★ and more colorful, writer's cafe is a beautiful site

[wordman]

so u should visit more often

[sunprincess]

....lol, visit no way....I'm staying ★ that other site was too dark and depressing...I tried staying ★ wasn't even there a year, I have to go

[wordman]

my poetic side is not bad either,music and photos

[sunprincess]

......I've always loved adding photos, this helps bring the poem alive ★ like when I read "Silence" with the music video playing, the poem was so much more beautiful

[wordman]

yeah,that`s why hello poetry does not have a lot of poets there

[sunprincess]

.....the site doesn't have much too keep anyone interested ★