Silence

 

Silence

rolling through my brain,

as fast,

as a fast moving train.

 

Through,

the portals,

of my mind ,taking me back,

back in time.

 

Where

memories run deep,

deep into my soul,

a place,only i can go.

 

like

a waterfall,

falling from my mind,

taking me back, back in time...

 

Reviews

[Tiana]

Silence can be a great time to reflect and also very soothing. Then again, I can overthink things too lol Great poem, Ron ...

[wordman]

thank you tiana,looking for a new write from you !
got any ideas on a colab yet

[Tiana]

you're welcome. It's always a pleasure Ron. I'm open to suggestions :)

[Tate Viviano]

A very grounding poem. It reminds us to still our mind and reflect on the past. Great stuff as always!

[wordman]

thank you tate

[MCS]

One needs to take time and reflect but remain open to the new and yet to come...lovely poem

[wordman]

thank you mcs,appreciate your words

[MCS]

you're welcome, i enjoy reading your words.

[Ayushi Beura]

Ohh the flow of ur poem is so heart touching...no words can describe how beautiful it is
awesome write:)

[wordman]

thank you !

[Pryde Foltz]

Loved this write, Ron:):)

[wordman]

nice to see you ! thank`s

[Valentine]

Funny thing silence...that seems to be the time that a persons mind goes deepest into the past. Nice write. Valentine

[wordman]

thank you kathie !

[Valentine]

Nothing but ice and the haunting sound of silence here Ron. Kathie

[redzone]

they say "silence is golden" but they gt it all wrong... silence is dark and foreboding and often creepy.. give me a noisy city street, birds squawking over food or the voice of the one you love... even when we go back in time it is often accompanied with music playing in the background...

anyway just thinking out loud Ron, and humming to your panflute song

redzone

[wordman]

i totally understand,it`s best in every day living and all the noises it brngs,thank you for the visit..

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You create a hollowness, a feeling of floating, free thinking in a few short stanzas. That state when you are simply feeing, grasping at the silence for answers and reason perhaps?

[wordman]

we need a little silence in our lives,it gives us time to reflect,thank you

[Gerry Legister]

Silence is an awesome thing, especially when it starts to trickled down into the mind fine write

[wordman]

thank you gerry,good to see you at w/c

[Einstein Noodle]

mmmmmmmmeditative ..nice song to go with.. especially in using the panflute .. its deafening isn't it ..silence ;)
E.

[wordman]

thank you e/n