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A Single Tear

A Single Tear

A Poem by wordman
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It seems i have fallen from your grace

i no longer see your face

so i sit to write but the words wont come

 

Tears roll down my face

it seems i have fallen from your grace

down trodden and all alone

no one to call up on

 

A deaf ear has now taken the place

of my god and his grace

though i walk through the valley of death

i do fear evil i feel alone my heart cold

and out of place

 

On my knees

on my face

praying to god to once

more show me his face

 

But not a sound

do i hear

only feel the warmth

of a single tear...


© 2017 wordman



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Beautiful and sad
like the cries of David
in psalms of the bible
very heartfelt.



On my knees

on my face

praying to god to once

more show me his face



But not a sound

do i hear

only feel the warmth

of a single tear...

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading,my spiritual side
The poem is very beautiful to such an amazing degree, i'm left with awe while my mind wanders to each stanza. Imagery played a big part to me while reading this. Thank you for such an amazing write Wordman.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the nice review
What a heart felt poem. Full of soul and sadness. Thanks for composing and sharing Wordman

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading
I think many people temporarily lose their spiritual side. Just don't worry about it, I think Him upstairs is still there. Just feel a bit of 'love in your heart' while you are in that valley... that is supposed to keep the fear away!
To me it sounds a s though you had 'word-block'. This is very common to writers. Best just to let it pass!

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the review,maybe you are right,but it seems like this for most of the world,most of th.. read more
Great Aunt Astri

1 Month Ago

I think this is true... probably modern technology is largely to blame. It which seems to think it h.. read more
A poem filled with true emotions. Every word of the poem touches my heart. We compose such piece when we loss someone or something important in our life. It is a sad poem also, Wordman. Thanks for sharing.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

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This poem makes me feel so sad, but I relate. I feel like this often. I really like the repetition you use—beautiful.

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you for the visit !
I'm 100% with Relic on this one. My sentiments exactly. Bravo W.M.
:)

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you for the visit my friend
It's always sad when we feel forgotten about and left alone. I like the song and the picture to go along with the cold tone of your words.

Nice job Wordman.

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you relic,even i have a spiritual side
"But not a sound
do i hear
only feel the warmth
of a single tear..."
That last stanza stand-out the most... It is something that bite to the heart and leave some scar... Amazing piece...

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
Beautiful I cried it's wonderful I look forward to reading more

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 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you for the visit

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