my Cherie amour

my girl,

she is the girl of my dreams,

she is a dream come true

she is beautiful,

and she is smart,

built like a brick house

sometimes we talk for hours,

about nothing,and about everything,

we sit on the swing and just talk

i am so in love,

when she kisses me,

it sends shivers down my spine

her skin so soft,her breasts full,

her sweet lips kissing mine

i`m so proud that she is mine

and when we make love

i`m in heaven,she makes me,

feel like a man

i am so proud of her,

she is everything a man,

could ever want or need

and her love is mine...

Reviews

[barleygirl]

I love this classic S.W. song & I love it when poetry is inspired by the kind of music I love. Your sentiments are expressed in a simple but sincere way . . . you must be a hopeless romantic . . . thank you for showing me how the other half imagines romance can be *smile* Fondly, Margie

[wordman]

i hate to admit it but i am margie,we are made for love and happiness and romance,i even still cry sometimes watching a sad love story

[FJ Davis]

Unabashedly loving; strongly devotional.
Honesty that is charming and disarming.
Refreshing read!

[wordman]

thank ou for the visit..

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful song and amazing words shared. A outstanding poem for love and appreciation.
Coyote

[wordman]

thank you john

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Neville]

What a smashing little love poem this turned out to be and believe me, there is a gall out there somewhere built like a brick house who is both very lucky and blushing right now.....N

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Sami Khalil]

"i am so in love,
when she kisses me,
it sends shivers down my spine

her skin so soft,her breasts full"

Your words will make ladies swoon and dream forever. Lovely...:)..............

[wordman]

thank you sami,appreciate the visit

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Great Aunt Astri]

Simple but sincere. Hope the sun shines on you both.
A very refreshing read.

[wordman]

thank you,the sun is shining

[Tom]

Everyone has a soulmate somewhere out there, some finds theirs, others sadly never meet, but here you've certainly found yours!

Blissfully beautifully in every way, kudos wordman!

[wordman]

thank you for the visit tom

[Tony Jordan]

There's nothing like that feeling W.M.
You wrote it so very well here.
I am lucky enough to have experienced that feeling of chest-bursting love once in my life (apart from family and friends that is).
I can relate to this indeed Sir.

sorry - I just keep coming back to this one mate.
Class!!

[wordman]

thank you very much

[emmajoy]

.. 'sometimes we talk for hours, ~ about nothing
,and about everything, ~ we sit on the swing and just talk.. '

Such an honest, down to earth, beautiful poem about and for your love.. Beautiful. Also the voice is such a silky smooth, clear one, perfect for your words.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit em

[emmajoy]

Truth be known, think i owe you a few more visits.

[wordman]

i don`t keep track,just happy to see you when you do stop by...

[MOON]

Beautiful romantic gift of love , the song rocks and complements writing

[wordman]

thank you for the visit !