Memories

In the misty waters

of my mind,

i reminisce of the hallowed,

memories that i left behind.

 

Once as vivid

as night and day

now only misty memories

slowly fading away

 

Fading away

like a gentle breeze

on a summers day

but it seems everything fades away

 

Even those

hallowed memories

of me and you,and the feelings,

that we once knew...

Reviews

[Tom]

Nothing lasts forever, though we try to cling on as best we can despite the gradual evisceration and erosion of those halcyon days...beautifully nostalgic and reminiscent wordman!!

[wordman]

thanks for the review tom,every thing changes ,especially love ,we seem to hold on to it the hardest

[Paul Bell]

Strange how memories so powerful, dissipate through time. They always say, time heals. Always wondered about that.

[wordman]

not sure bout that ,but you can incorporate things into your memories,,lol,,thanks

[heartspeaks]

Nice...the flow of words rhymes perfectly. Memories are something that keep us together and connected with our loved ones
And interestingly.. your title brought me here...i've written a poem with the same title. I hope you get some time to read it. I liked your work. Keep it up. And special mention that i loved your candle gif....superb..

[wordman]

thank you,i will read yours today

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Ron... memories are eternal... you can see them in the face of flowers ... hear voices in the chirping of the birds... feel the touch in a baby's smile.... truly, Pat

[wordman]

thank you pat

[John Alexander McFadyen]

So good to see a new poem from you Ron and one worth waiting for. There is such pathos in this write. The hollow feelings of loss captured so well.

[wordman]

thank you john

[Priyanshi]

Memories are so hard to forget ...it pains so much at the time, and the other time it seems to fade away, with time.
Loved the poem.

[wordman]

thank you for the visit

[Priyanshi]

My pleasure.

[DIVYA]

This feels sad. Knowing how much we once meant to each other. Yet a bitter truth wrapped in gentle, beautiful poetic words.

[wordman]

thank you very much divya,i appreciate your visit