With Out You

With Out You

A Poem by wordman



These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...


© 2017 wordman



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I enjoy this one very much. It's direct and heartfelt. Is this an older or newer poem for you? It seems a little different than the others, a little more unique to you. I wonder, after reading your bio, do you ever write about boxing? Or use boxing imagery...that would be interesting. Thank you.

Posted 6 Days Ago


 wordman

6 Days Ago

thank you for the review,never wrote about boxing or used any images.i don`t remember when i wrote i.. read more
Oh, wow...what woman wouldn’t want a charming man to write an “ode” to her and memories of her resilient beauty? Bravo, mister. Bravo! 👏🏼

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit
To be blessed by undying enduring love is a gift. One we should all recognize and wish for! Your Lady is truly blessed to have your love and your poetry!

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit,don`t share my poetry a lot
Your poems are like sweet songs of love, full of affections and passions, sometimes gentle, sometimes strong, they flow so nicely with a musical tune, thank You for sharing this, and may Love ever shine over You*

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you,you are kind
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Light

3 Months Ago

You are welcome my friend.
You Romantic Devil you capturing a heart of Gold.

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you falcon
Lovely sentiment expressed in these tender and romantic lines.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you chris
This is so romantic and passionate and beautiful expressed like a love song. Made my heart swell and feel the spirit of everything you said with such loveliness and emotions.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Dawn

3 Months Ago

Ron you really are a sweetheart and a lovely man. With a wonderful heart and soul. And humble work i.. read more
 wordman

3 Months Ago

the pleasure is mine dawn,and i`m blushing
Dawn

3 Months Ago

Don't blush Ron. As it's all true. And truth speaks. Louder than words. Hugs. Dawn.
A well written love poem filled with emotion. Thanks for sharing..

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
SZHZIA

3 Months Ago

You are welcome... :-)
This is a very emotional piece i enjoyed reading thanks for sharing

Posted 5 Months Ago


 wordman

5 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
a touching poem my friend there is a flow of emotions between joy and sadness.

Posted 7 Months Ago


 wordman

7 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
sette

7 Months Ago

no problem my friend

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