With Out You

With Out You

A Poem by wordman



These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...


© 2017 wordman



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"your the only one for me.



You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind."

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

thank you my friend
Sami Khalil

3 Weeks Ago

You are welcome...
Beautiful sax, really bringing meaning and romance to the poems set up - really meaninful🌹🌹

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

the music always amplifies the words,life is music and words,,thank you for reading
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Zoe
Aw, what a sweet confession. Beautifully penned!

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you zoe
Zoe

1 Month Ago

Most welcome
THAT'S LIKE A SONG, I ENJOYED SINGING IT AND ITS A WONDERFUL WORK

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

i appreciate your visit
beautiful piece of work .
great flow with the words . i enjoyed reading this shows the passion of a lost lover . i can kind of relate to this poem . keep up the great work .

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

good to see you back
Jennifer Little

1 Month Ago

i have been through a lot these bast 3 years so its been hard for me but slowly getting back
 wordman

1 Month Ago

well writing will be a good start
So very beautiful and touching.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit
You said all too well what true love represents and thanks for sharing

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thanks,,good to see you
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...
This is a very sweet write, very beautiful.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you very much
A sweet and touching tribute to a special someone. I enjoyed the read. It's refreshing to find that love is still alive and well in this modern age of social media romance. Good write.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
Very vulnerable expression of love. I like how this poem gives the reader a glimpse into the narrator's emotions. Truly romantic and full of heart.

Posted 3 Months Ago


 wordman

3 Months Ago

thank you for the visit

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wordman

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