With Out You

With Out You

A Poem by wordman



These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...


© 2017 wordman



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Soft, sensitive and worthwhile words shared my friend. I liked the way you used the memories and the thoughts. You made the reader understand and feel the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Days Ago


 wordman

2 Days Ago

a tribute to the woman in your life,,thanks john
So romantic and beautiful! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Have you written any book?


Posted 5 Days Ago


 wordman

4 Days Ago

thank you norah,never wrote a book
damn...well said .. completely vulnerable and i hope your protagonist is on solid ground ;}
i remember swearing i would never go "there" again ... but here i am back at the door ..well said..fine music too!
E.

Posted 1 Week Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

well,we`re not known for our mental stability,,thank you
Einstein Noodle

1 Week Ago

no...i guess we are not :((( God bless dear friend and do be well today in the moment eh?!
Amen! simple, direct and nothing more needed in this write. excellent

Posted 1 Week Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

thank you for the visit,appreciate it ~
Such heartfelt words....beautifully done :)

Posted 1 Week Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

thank you for the visit
"...i will always`s be your man ..." yeah, go Word!!! :)

I keep reading this poem over and over. Love it

Posted 1 Week Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

1 Week Ago

i`m glad it has touched you !
very nice, well done!!!! love the second last paragraph

Posted 1 Week Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

thank you for the visit !
Very passionate and heart warming words. There is honesty in your words. I really liked this.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for reading
Najam Us Saher

2 Weeks Ago

You're welcome.
Gorgeous romance and rhythm to a wonderful song. You are serenading good. I love it.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you sami
Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

You are welcome, Wordman.

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