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With Out You

With Out You

A Poem by wordman



These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...


© 2017 wordman



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Your poems are like sweet songs of love, full of affections and passions, sometimes gentle, sometimes strong, they flow so nicely with a musical tune, thank You for sharing this, and may Love ever shine over You*

Posted 2 Days Ago


 wordman

1 Day Ago

thank you,you are kind
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Light

1 Day Ago

You are welcome my friend.
You Romantic Devil you capturing a heart of Gold.

Posted 2 Days Ago


 wordman

2 Days Ago

thank you falcon
Lovely sentiment expressed in these tender and romantic lines.

Chris

Posted 3 Days Ago


 wordman

3 Days Ago

thank you chris
This is so romantic and passionate and beautiful expressed like a love song. Made my heart swell and feel the spirit of everything you said with such loveliness and emotions.

Posted 3 Days Ago


Dawn

3 Days Ago

Ron you really are a sweetheart and a lovely man. With a wonderful heart and soul. And humble work i.. read more
 wordman

3 Days Ago

the pleasure is mine dawn,and i`m blushing
Dawn

3 Days Ago

Don't blush Ron. As it's all true. And truth speaks. Louder than words. Hugs. Dawn.
A well written love poem filled with emotion. Thanks for sharing..

Posted 1 Week Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

thank you for the visit
SZHZIA

1 Week Ago

You are welcome... :-)
This is a very emotional piece i enjoyed reading thanks for sharing

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
a touching poem my friend there is a flow of emotions between joy and sadness.

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
sette

4 Months Ago

no problem my friend
Such a beautiful and yet sad piece...

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you for reading and leaving your comment
A dedicated ode to love and the endless pining of the bleeding heart for her. Well expressed wordman.

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

i think i was born to write the blues,,thank you
Mallika Relives

4 Months Ago

Quizas, quizas, quizas. You are welcome.
WOW! I can only imagine this kind of depth of love from someone. I know what it is like to give. I do not know what it is like to receive. What a wonderful heart you have.

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you very much

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