With Out You

With Out You

A Poem by wordman



These words babe !

i write for you,

you know who you are,

you hung the moon,you created the stars

 

You captivated my heart,

your the only one i see,

it`s you babe,

your the only one for me.

 

You see,

true love paralyzes the mind,

there could never be another,

my heart is blind.

 

No matter where i look,

it`s you that i see,

can`t you see inside my soul,

can`t you see inside of me.

 

My heart,is like a volcano erupting inside,

without you babe im just a drop in the sand,

i love you always,

i will always`s be your man ...


© 2017 wordman



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Very vulnerable expression of love. I like how this poem gives the reader a glimpse into the narrator's emotions. Truly romantic and full of heart.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit
Awe, feel good words of love.. Nicely done. :-)

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit.
Susan  Capozzi

1 Month Ago

You're welcome :-))
Hats off to the way you express! Great poem :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you my friend
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Without you i am just a single speck of nothing sand.... Volcanic eruption of captivating forlorn fleeting...

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you very much
Silente

1 Month Ago

You are very welcome, sir
Okay this is so sweet. Who ever this is for is going to melt! Awesome job.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you very much,just a poem
Diane

1 Month Ago

Welcome....
overwhelmed by your love a great tribute to your'' babe'' and loved one... beautiful poem

Posted 1 Month Ago


marilyn 1225

1 Month Ago

that is a gift not so silly as say candy etc
 wordman

1 Month Ago

well paul mccartney said it best, when he said just another silly love song
marilyn 1225

1 Month Ago

well songs pour out hearts as poetry often does u
When reading poetry I love
Music like yours to think about the words that have been written. This is so beautifully gentle.

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit bonnie,i love music with the poem,it enhances the words
Soft, sensitive and worthwhile words shared my friend. I liked the way you used the memories and the thoughts. You made the reader understand and feel the words. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

a tribute to the woman in your life,,thanks john
So romantic and beautiful! Thanks for sharing it with us.
Have you written any book?


Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you norah,never wrote a book
damn...well said .. completely vulnerable and i hope your protagonist is on solid ground ;}
i remember swearing i would never go "there" again ... but here i am back at the door ..well said..fine music too!
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

2 Months Ago

well,we`re not known for our mental stability,,thank you
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

no...i guess we are not :((( God bless dear friend and do be well today in the moment eh?!

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