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Bitter Sweet Memories

Bitter Sweet Memories

A Poem by wordman



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bitter sweet memories,

lay gentle on her mind,

another place,

another time.

 

The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.

 

she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,

she feels like a woman left behind.

 

Once her heart,

a beautiful rose,

now her heart tattered and torn,

as it starts to close.

 

Her mind wanders,

her soul at bay,

maybe love will bloom again,

i hope and pray.

 

A woman,

that has lost her bloom,

her heart melts,

as it goes back in her cocoon.

 

But one day,

her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon...


© 2017 wordman


© 2018 wordman



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You write with pure emotions, with serenity, crystal and clear, You compose some beautifully amazing expressions, You can reach to all our hearts. gently like a breeze.

wonderfully selfless compassionate poem, one day she will realize that her true love is You, the one who was watching over her, was feeling her, in each step... who will melt her cocoon, and bloom her heart again.

Posted 1 Day Ago


 wordman

1 Day Ago

i put all my emotions and feelings in all my poetry,
poetry is your feelings,you spill out yo.. read more
A beautiful tale of romance gone bad but there he stood looking for his chance to rise up and fill her heart with love all over again as soon as she can recover and start anew she sure will be looking for you a friend indeed.

Posted 2 Days Ago


 wordman

2 Days Ago

thank you falcon
Bittersweet of a broken-hearted lady. Such sentiments that ache and yearn inside still.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

thank you for reading
Dawn

3 Weeks Ago

thank you for sharing.
good job keep up the great work . loved it

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


jennifer little

3 Weeks Ago

ooops guess ive already read this poem and read it again but anyways great job i read it twice lol
 wordman

3 Weeks Ago

thank you jennifer
Simply beautiful. You have a fantastic grasp on the narrative of this poem, and it hits the reader right in the heart. Your wording is pitch perfect, and the flow is super smooth. The only flaw with this piece is that I didn't write it lol. It's a great piece, and it makes me excited to read more of your work. Great job.
-Richard

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

please do,lol,you give great reviews
Richard McLin

4 Months Ago

I only give great reviews to great pieces of writing.
 wordman

4 Months Ago

i appreciate the kind words my friend
Time and a place for everything better to have patience and see the true full blooming than watch it fade- wonderful words like always- wishing your dreams come true🌹

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

you are sweet,thank you for reading
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

4 Months Ago

Always a pleasure just don’t get much time now for reviews with new job but I also appreciate your.. read more
 wordman

4 Months Ago

we will cross paths when we can,
how sweet my friend that you will be there when she blooms it means you will be waiting for that time and that is so romantic

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you for the visit
sette

4 Months Ago

no problem
lovely, very beautiful. i loved the last stanza.:))

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you for reading and leaving your review
Tannu Prajapati

4 Months Ago

My pleasure. :))
"her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon..."

Posted 6 Months Ago


"The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.



she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,"

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

6 Months Ago

don`t we all,thank you my friend
Sami Khalil

6 Months Ago

:)...............

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