Bitter Sweet Memories

Bitter Sweet Memories

A Poem by wordman



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bitter sweet memories,

lay gentle on her mind,

another place,

another time.

 

The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.

 

she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,

she feels like a woman left behind.

 

Once her heart,

a beautiful rose,

now her heart tattered and torn,

as it starts to close.

 

Her mind wanders,

her soul at bay,

maybe love will bloom again,

i hope and pray.

 

A woman,

that has lost her bloom,

her heart melts,

as it goes back in her cocoon.

 

But one day,

her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon...


© 2017 wordman


© 2018 wordman



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Simply beautiful. You have a fantastic grasp on the narrative of this poem, and it hits the reader right in the heart. Your wording is pitch perfect, and the flow is super smooth. The only flaw with this piece is that I didn't write it lol. It's a great piece, and it makes me excited to read more of your work. Great job.
-Richard

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

please do,lol,you give great reviews
Richard McLin

1 Month Ago

I only give great reviews to great pieces of writing.
 wordman

1 Month Ago

i appreciate the kind words my friend
Time and a place for everything better to have patience and see the true full blooming than watch it fade- wonderful words like always- wishing your dreams come true🌹

Posted 1 Month Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

you are sweet,thank you for reading
Thoughts In Time

1 Month Ago

Always a pleasure just don’t get much time now for reviews with new job but I also appreciate your.. read more
 wordman

1 Month Ago

we will cross paths when we can,
how sweet my friend that you will be there when she blooms it means you will be waiting for that time and that is so romantic

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for the visit
sette

1 Month Ago

no problem
lovely, very beautiful. i loved the last stanza.:))

Posted 2 Months Ago


 wordman

1 Month Ago

thank you for reading and leaving your review
Tannu Prajapati

1 Month Ago

My pleasure. :))
"her heart will start to bloom,

and i will be there,

to melt that cocoon..."

Posted 3 Months Ago


"The love

of my life,

that i have,

left behind.



she feels betrayed,

battered and beaten,

all through her mind,"

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

3 Months Ago

don`t we all,thank you my friend
Sami Khalil

3 Months Ago

:)...............
love that last stanza, this is such a wonderful write here, So well written.

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you,i always appreciate your reviews
pawsette

4 Months Ago

not a problem.
great poem keep up the good work . keep writing love the romantic poems .

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank`s,i guess this is my calling
Jennifer Little

4 Months Ago

probally ur real good at writing romantic poems
 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank`s,i appreciate it
Love this one. A true description of a heart that has lost its love. But, I do like that there is a hopeful note and possibility still exists. Great poem!

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

thank you for reading
Some might call you a "hopeless romantic."
But, as someone once said, you seem more to be a hopeful romantic.
Impressive work, Wordman.

Posted 4 Months Ago


 wordman

4 Months Ago

lol, i am confused in my own mind..thank you for the visit

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