Elusive Woman

Elusive Woman

A Poem by wordman
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Nicely done! I really liked some of that word play, illusive v. elusive, "glides" through the sand, "plays and teases". And your ending, another zinger, damn. An apparition, spritely and sweet, a newly minted ghost. A genuinely good piece of poetry!

Btw, you ever do stand up comedy? In your funnier pieces, you write hilarious punchlines, and even in your more strictly poetic stuff you structure your work such that it always leads in anticipation to that final conclusive thought. If you haven't, maybe you should, or not, whatever, lol
thanks for sharing!

Hailey

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you,people tell me that i tell them better than writing them,i will stick to the romantic side



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This was very straight forward. It held well to the title. With very little straying. Well done

Posted 1 Week Ago


 wordman

1 Week Ago

thank you very much
Bmmed94

1 Week Ago

No problem, thank you
Rhytmic poem with a glow. Easy and laid back. Like the way you present poems. Enjoyed!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for the visit,
Bam. She sounds awesome. The poem does too. ;-)

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for reading
Diane

2 Weeks Ago

You are very welcome.
Romance and loveliness all with your strong passions and fractions... She is gliding away as you try to snatch love and keep it. Excellent, sir Wordman.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

just a casual sun light stroll across the sand.
people watching ,wishing
Sami Khalil

2 Weeks Ago

Casual might turn to serious. Lol.
You are welcome.
I like how your poem shifts from sand to snow. Moonlight to sunlight.

There's an air of playfulness in this elusive woman, as she "glides through"

It seems she is everywhere or could it be...

We just see, the qualities we adore in a certain person, in others we meet.

There's just a certain something...about someone. That reminds us of this "elusive woman"

Lovely write, my friend.





Posted 2 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you for the visit,good to see you
Ah, love the poem, picture and song. Very evocative. Your poems are always pleasant to read.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

glad you liked it,,thank`s
strike a pose, every time I heard the word vogue Madonna takes over. You describe an untouchable, with words like sweet, soft, in glowing terms, terms of longing we can feel.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Corset

1 Week Ago

oh egads, we don't want to scare the kids! lol
 wordman

1 Week Ago

lol,are you kidding,scare the kids
Corset

1 Week Ago

lol!.........
makes me smile ...especially those closing 3 lines ;) i think this particular lady would never be caught in something like Hustler ...that is still on the market isn't it? :))))))))))))
E.


Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

thank you e, i don`t know but if theres money in it then i`m sure they still are
 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

she was actually on here w/c
Einstein Noodle

2 Weeks Ago

oh...am i sorry i missed her?? ;) read your poem again and think of "Lucy in the Sky" ... how i sang.. read more
i like the poem, it tells about something mysterious about the woman, i like poems which are open to many interpretations, there is the freedom of expression and creativity being explored. nice work.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


 wordman

2 Weeks Ago

yeah,always leave them hanging,,thank you

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