Haily

this is about twin girls, one who lives one who dies.

the darkness surrounds me,
the dead clawing at me,
i need to live
live for her.

i fight the current,
i have to save her,
she is my life,
she is my twin.

i reach,
the water filling my lungs.
so close i could almost touch her,
fabric slips through my fingers.

she is gone,
i lived but she died.
my twin,
Haily.

Reviews

[nastassia]

sad poem, but very well written

[AaronFreitas]

What a sad poem... you gave excellent descriptions and just beautiful honest emotion behind the words. Good work!

[cassandra ziemba]

thank you!

[the devil in I]

Its so touching when u showed it to me at school I almost cryed