Trees

Trees

A Poem by cassandra ziemba

they billow in the breeze,
while giving life to you and me.

day and night,
they work their might.

though we neglect them every day,
they give us life anyway.

© 2015 cassandra ziemba


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Trees breathe so the rest of the creatures in the world can too.
You conveyed that flawlessly..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cassandra ziemba

8 Years Ago

thank you very much
-inactive now-

8 Years Ago

You're welcome
Great poem! I love the ending part there. It's a very sweet and simple poem. I would say to put more similes or metaphors or more descriptions, but that would ruin it. I think it's perfect the way it is. Good job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cassandra ziemba

8 Years Ago

thank you very much! im glad you like it!
Ashley Arita

8 Years Ago

Your welcome!

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Added on April 20, 2015
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cassandra ziemba
cassandra ziemba

live oak, FL



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i love to read and write. i also like to draw, and cook. i've written 16 books and counting, even though im only 15. im only putting my newer books/poems on here though. i've been writing since 4th gr.. more..

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