Monster

In your closet
Under your bed
In your mind
Stuck in your head
You see me now
With curled horns,
Sharp teeth
And red eyes
A creature of your nightmares
A creature of your dreams
In the closet
Or under your bed
You'll never know
When you will be dead

Author's Note

One of my first horror poems. It is lame, I know, but I felt like posting it.

Reviews

This is very creepy, I wonder though why the creature is of nightmares and dreams? Does that mean that it can come deceptive as being something that might be good but then end up being horrible or does it more mean that you can't escape it, it goes into your dreams AND nightmares? Either way it's spooky :)

[BeautifulDisaster]

awesome. i liked it. :)

[Rebecca Rogers]

I thought it was good! And you know me and my horror :D

[Brianna Brie]

You see me now
With curled horns,
Sharp teeth
And red eyes

Yeah, what is it about closets anyway. When we were little, my brothers set the closet on fire to burn the boogie man out of it. Cool poem.

[revenant21]

It doesn't suck. It was a pretty good poem, I liked it.

[Tai-San]

Andrew, this is really creepy. I guess it's what you were aiming for, right? well, then you did it. i like it loads, though it gave me the goosebumps abit.

[J.Black]

Hahaha shut up Andrew, it is not lame! I am getting pissed at all your author notes lmao! I think you are a great poet okay? And this attempt at a horror piece was actually well done.. although you are friendly and were under my bed, I don't know if I would be that afraid, haha!

[Flame DM]

i thought it was cute! I read this and what flashed in my head was. Mr. Boogie Oogie Man! loved it. =]

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